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Blinded By Fire

You weren’t seen coming; this woman you are now; Here you are though; And in my ineptness; I’m left dog paddling; At the deep end of the pool. It seems never completely dark; And even in the midst of an upcoming storm I see light through the clouds; Leaving me unprepared; And immersed in water the coyote sits unattended. Butter melts; and drawn by you are those; Sweet tantalizing words; That crumbles the tallest of walls. And the river righteous; Now runs crimson; from hearts that have bled. And from the world of forgiveness; There seems no escape; For one must forgive those of who no not; And while holding a shield above his head The knees of the defender buckle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/9/2009 6:48:00 PM
this is a beautiful piece, with strong imagery. the river runnign crimson from bleeding hearts was probably my favorite part, it was very well done. an amazing piece! --madison
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Date: 3/15/2009 8:31:00 AM
The imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Much to think about here. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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