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blinded blows

a blizzard flurried fractured flakes blinded blows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/29/2011 4:25:00 PM
Cool alliteration in this one, Deb!
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Date: 1/27/2011 4:55:00 AM
blinded by the white! me too dazed and confused too! Thanks so much for all your nice comments I hope you gave me a limerick for the animal limerick contest, it seems stalled? H E L P Light & Love
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:33:00 AM
Try saying that middle line five times very fast. Another good haiku, Deb.
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:52:00 AM
I am stopping by this morning to read your amazing poetry, and to thank you for your kind comments on mine Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2011 10:36:00 AM
Excellence Deb. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/18/2011 1:32:00 PM
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Date: 1/18/2011 6:22:00 AM
thankxxx Deb.. going to leave mine as a Haiku as two lines represent Nature and it's rage and the last line balances the human aspect of the poem.. which is what Charles asked for .. don't want to confuse myself ..haha..so leaving it as Haiku.. think yours is also as it is in same vein.. good luck and appreciate your amazing efforts in this contest luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 6:02:00 AM
thankxx so very much Deb.. will remove those dots which he usually asks for in previous contests... he did a long blog today but due to work schedule could not fully read.. but so appreciate your kind assistance my friend.. and good luck again..luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:27:00 AM
awesome entry Deb for the contest creating much imagery and powerful visuals ... good luck my friend.. my entry is thunder trembles.. if u read let me know if u think Haiku or Senryu please.. thankxxx...
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