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Blind Me With Passion

I will not wade with you in ocean shallows

Love must run far deeper than a shoal

Having enough passion to make me blind

A love rivaling the grandest of hallows

Heal my heart and make it whole

Drown me in fervid depths of your mind

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2017

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Winged Warrior Date: 12/4/2017 8:19:00 AM Excellent write my friend...hope all is alright...best wishes...^WW^ Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/11/2017 6:56:00 AM lol WW...Dory has been found and my little one is more into Cars! Winged Warrior Date: 12/4/2017 10:23:00 PM 'hunky dory' I sense a disturbance in the force ...or you've been watching 'Finding Dory' with your grandson lol...best wishes and happy holidays Lin-Merry Christmas...^WW^ Lin Lane Date: 12/4/2017 8:28:00 AM Thanks, my winged friend. Everything is hunky dory with me.

John Gondolf Date: 12/3/2017 2:00:00 PM I enjoyed this poem, Lin. True love always runs deep otherwise it's just a passing infatuation or just lust. John Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/3/2017 5:21:00 PM Thank you, John.

Jan Allison Date: 12/3/2017 12:35:00 PM oh so much passion in your words Lin. I especially like the final two lines:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/3/2017 5:21:00 PM Thanks so very much, Jan.