Blind Me With Passion

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I will not wade with you in ocean shallows Love must run far deeper than a shoal Having enough passion to make me blind A love rivaling the grandest of hallows Heal my heart and make it whole Drown me in fervid depths of your mind

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Winged Warrior

Date: 12/4/2017 8:19:00 AM

Excellent write my friend...hope all is alright...best wishes...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 12/11/2017 6:56:00 AM

lol WW...Dory has been found and my little one is more into Cars!

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/4/2017 10:23:00 PM

'hunky dory' I sense a disturbance in the force ...or you've been watching 'Finding Dory' with your grandson lol...best wishes and happy holidays Lin-Merry Christmas...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2017 8:28:00 AM

Thanks, my winged friend. Everything is hunky dory with me.

John Gondolf

Date: 12/3/2017 2:00:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem, Lin. True love always runs deep otherwise it's just a passing infatuation or just lust. John

Lin Lane
Date: 12/3/2017 5:21:00 PM

Thank you, John.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/3/2017 12:35:00 PM

oh so much passion in your words Lin. I especially like the final two lines:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 12/3/2017 5:21:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Jan.