Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Blind Me With Passion

I will not wade with you in ocean shallows

Love must run far deeper than a shoal

Having enough passion to make me blind

A love rivaling the grandest of hallows

Heal my heart and make it whole

Drown me in fervid depths of your mind

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Winged Warrior December 4, 2017 at 8:19 AM Excellent write my friend...hope all is alright...best wishes...^WW^ Lin Lane December 11, 2017 at 6:56 AM lol WW...Dory has been found and my little one is more into Cars! Winged Warrior December 4, 2017 at 10:23 PM 'hunky dory' I sense a disturbance in the force ...or you've been watching 'Finding Dory' with your grandson lol...best wishes and happy holidays Lin-Merry Christmas...^WW^ Lin Lane December 4, 2017 at 8:28 AM Thanks, my winged friend. Everything is hunky dory with me.

John Gondolf December 3, 2017 at 2:00 PM I enjoyed this poem, Lin. True love always runs deep otherwise it's just a passing infatuation or just lust. John Lin Lane December 3, 2017 at 5:21 PM Thank you, John.

Jan Allison December 3, 2017 at 12:35 PM oh so much passion in your words Lin. I especially like the final two lines:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane December 3, 2017 at 5:21 PM Thanks so very much, Jan.