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Poetic Form: Senryu

Inspired: 2023 December 08

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are you blind madame not see the stop sign lady sign I saw~~not you

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Date: 12/9/2023 12:51:00 PM
I hope no harm done. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K
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Hilo Poet
Date: 12/9/2023 1:01:00 PM
Nah, it was just fine, --twenty bucks, you're welcome, Sara. Aloha, William
Date: 12/8/2023 7:08:00 PM
Oh quite an intriguing senryu poem this is, with creativity! Wonderfully crafted..
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Date: 12/8/2023 7:34:00 PM
I'm grateful, Hiya. Aloha, William

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