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silver branch glistens wellspring torrents green tide rush fool’s gold rock ashore Date posted : 19 th March 2021 Contest : Lets Get Creative With Haiku Sponsor : Constance La France NB Branch as in river or tree feature. Early promise later disappointment theme. Attempt at figure three haiku structure.

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Date: 4/7/2021 11:30:00 AM
appearances are deceiving, when the unexpected shines, the look of the fool glows ... salute alkas
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Howard Kerr
Date: 4/7/2021 12:49:00 PM
Thanks for your comment Howard
Date: 3/24/2021 3:27:00 PM
Howard, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative With Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/22/2021 7:05:00 PM
you certainly went to town on creativity, how the structure and layout of the poem, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2021 4:47:00 PM
Cleverly done! Congrats on your win, Howard! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/22/2021 2:26:00 PM
Congrats, Howard. I wonder what figure three haiku structure means!
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Date: 3/22/2021 1:03:00 PM
- Back with a congratulations, Howard :)
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Date: 3/19/2021 6:23:00 AM
- A great haiku, Howard :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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