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Blind Drunk

A blind poet stumbles into a bar
Counts the number of drunk patrons there are
   Adds up all the burps
   Plus all the loud slurps
Drives them home in his brand-new sports car

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Jean Bush

February 11, 2020 at 3:20 PM

Oh my! I'll bet his car lost it's brand new smell that night. Hahaha! A pint in the tum, when all's said & done, a slurp & a burp, oh, damn, my shirt!! Bottoms up, kid! Hahaha!

Gershon Wolf

February 11, 2020 at 4:11 PM

Your comment is a lot funnier than my limerick, my friend. Thanks! :) gw

Brenda Chiri

January 24, 2020 at 7:40 PM

Hahaha! Good one my friend!;) I'm beginning to feel better after readinv your humor!;)

Lindsay Laurie

January 24, 2020 at 6:35 PM

G'day Gershon … down this way, if you drink too much you are classed as blind drunk, and you'd almost think when they drive it's a driverless car and the police are usually around to escort - for a night in a cell. Clever limerick Gershon - Lindsay

Kim Rodrigues

January 24, 2020 at 8:51 AM

Funny in so many ways! We have to wonder at the blind man himself. Why is “he” there, is this all in his imagination, and is there more to the drunken poets story. I think I want more. Use him again!

Kim Rodrigues

January 24, 2020 at 9:05 PM

Absolutely! :) all smiles

Gershon Wolf

January 24, 2020 at 11:48 AM

Wow, Kim. I sure was blind to all the possibilities you raised. And here's a deal for you: I give you more of the blind man in exchange for more in-depth comments like this one. Fair? Smiles, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

January 24, 2020 at 8:20 AM

A fine funny limerick, clever as always Gershon. Blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

January 24, 2020 at 11:41 AM

Thanks for the good cheer, Jennifer! Keep smiling, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

January 24, 2020 at 8:16 AM

Hilariously done. I mean you are on a roll.

Gershon Wolf

January 24, 2020 at 11:41 AM

You're right. I am on a roll: My preferred condiments are mustard, catsup, and pickle. Hold those onions! P.U! LOL. Thanks, Caren. Best wishes, Gershon