Blew the Feathers Right Off

Cats are lounging, small puppy's gruff 
One hen a strutting just doing its stuff 
Sunny afternoon, we can’t get enough 
Gramps, then snorts some of his snuff 
One loud sneeze; the hen’s in the buff
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 5:15 PM
Gramps got cocaine rattlin' round his brain?! ~ Henhouse Humor
Hankins Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Hilarious, Indiana. I especially laughed reading the last two lines. That's some sneeze to blow the feathers right off the hen!
Shaw Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 11:20 AM
I wasn't going to put it up, Milts, I just thought if its a fail I can just delete, but, hey ho, just shows . . . ; )
Brown Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:00 AM
Indiana, your poem was a "Hoot". "The hen in the buff." Enjoyed, Thanks for the smile. Blessings ~ Debra
Shaw Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 11:17 AM
No idea where it came from, a daft Sunday thought I suppose, hope you have a nice day . . . : )
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 5:35 AM
Hello Indiana Shaw, this is so funny. Thank you for the laughter to being the day. Blessings .
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Hello Indiana Shaw, I feel sorry for the hen. Huggies & blessings to you. I hope your Sunday was a good one.
Shaw Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 11:16 AM
Glad you passed by to read it, Darlene, that poor hen, bare the thought, huggles, and a blessed Sunday to you . . . : )
Kyser Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 5:24 AM
A plucked and plucky hen; She will be dressed again. With some help enabled, From farm straight to table. That’s gravy on your chin?
Shaw Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 11:21 AM
Ello, Jeff, laugh a minute, chicken dinner . . . ; )
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