Beata Agustin Poet Rhyme

BLEST FREEDOM BLISS

Grateful to God always
let’s savor bliss of divine liberation glow 
giving praise.

While reaching-out
we optimize liberty’s flow
sans pout.

Love’s deed
leads us all go
freed*.

Grateful to God always
we optimize liberty’s flow
freed.

*John 8:36 If the Son therefore shall make you free, ye shall be free indeed.

August 28, 2024
10th place, "Let's Minichu on freedom" Rhyme Poetry Writing Premiere Contest; Sponsored by Mohan Chutani; judged on 9/15/2024.

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Mohan Chutani September 18, 2024 at 6:21 AM Beata, thanks for participating in my contest and congratulations for your placement. Best, Mohan

Len Gasun September 17, 2024 at 8:28 AM Lovely Minichu like a beautiful song. Hugging this gem of yours my dear poet friend Beata. Thanks a lot for sharing and Big Congrats on your well-deserved win! God bless you always. Hugs

Reason A. Poteet September 16, 2024 at 8:10 AM Love your consistent emphasis on the spiritual, Beata. I debated a spiritual piece for my first minichu but chose another theme. When it did not place, I edited it as a tribute to God's grace. I am much happier with it now. Congratulations on your honorable - I appreciated and enjoyed your piece.

Crystol Woods September 16, 2024 at 7:05 AM Great theme idea and you've utilized the form perfectly I think! Love the poetic phrasing too! Xo

Miranda Hawley August 28, 2024 at 6:04 PM "While reaching-out we optimize liberty’s flow" I agree with your message in these two lines.