Blest Childhood

In this blest childhood stature, may I stay Savoring God’s goodness day after day Cheerfully walking upon peaceful way Basking under freedom, so purely gay. With child*-like faith, I please my Christ today Devoid of pretense along heaven’s ray Verily trusting, while hope-propped to pray Guarded by angels whenever I play. Midst childish game, I fulfill roles’ array A mom feeding dolls through flowery tray Doctor nursing patients without delay Teacher asserting between yea or nay. As my child-star sparkle goes for display I forsake shoes meant for graceful ballet “Charity princess now serves you,” I say Shining as light to those who go astray. Allowing the child in me to sashay I let myself frolic there on the bay Learning enigmatic tones, shading gray Singing, “Baby Jesus sleeps on the hay.” Never outgrowing fave child toy of clay My heart longs for parents’ love I can’t pay Their molding nurture of caring bouquet Keeps on wafting kindness-scent they did spray. Now to the Lord --- my child spirit I lay Always exploring as He drives fears away Still advancing with faith from evil sway “Praising You, Father” I’m blest to relay.
*Luke 18:17 Verily I say unto you, Whosoever shall not receive the kingdom of God as a little child shall in no wise enter therein. September 8, 2021 3rd place, "Your Inner Child" Poetry Writing Premier Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke; judged on 9/13/2021. 7th place, "Complete Singular Monorhyme - Rhyming End Words" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest Sponsored by Hilo Poet; judged on 12/13/2025
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Kendrick Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 1:28 PM
Congrats on your work placing in this contest. Way to go. Sara K
Rose  Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 11:16 AM
You are the epitome of charity with all the great works that you do dear Beata, may God continue to bless you with good health so you can continue your journey, Much love and congrats
Seeker Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 8:59 PM
An amazing write, radiating joy & faith & optimism! Gods bless, congrats on your win, Beata
Alex Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 7:28 PM
"Now to the Lord --- my child spirit I lay Always exploring as He drives fears away" With your beautiful Biblical quotation, this is a poem and prayer in one. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 12:39 PM
Wonderful - so glad this won. Congrats and God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Poet Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Beata, you wrote a brilliant poem in mono rhyme.
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 3:04 PM
Very sweet and so cute with the monorhyming, Beata!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Simply brilliant. I love this, sweet lady. It's a blessing to read and so exceptional ... amazing. God bless you, Love, Gina
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