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Blessing

a garden is a blessing from God within its silent surroundings my heart is closest to my creator
Silent One 1 June 2018 Example for 'When one line is not enough' contest.
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Amen! A transcendent quill travel is the shortest poetic distance between two ink points. The RW Theorem of Elevation. Lol! Excellent muse poetry, SO! Love and more love always.
Foster Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 6:07 PM
Lovely. Ann
Duet Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 1:41 AM
I love this one, ZZ. It describes exactly how I feel in a garden too. Also love the music and visuals. Beautiful....
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 6:37 AM
This is truly beautiful...Nature has a voice..and can touch us profoundly.
Williams Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 5:17 AM
Yet another beautiful poem. A great example....Maria
Warrior Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Do you really need another comment lol...alright...not bad lol...love and light...^WW^
Callus Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 4:08 PM
I love this short poem, S1. I can't imagine myself living happily without my peaceful and inspiring garden! Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:40 PM
very beautiful, Silent One. The music goes well with it too.
Hoffman Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:10 PM
A beautiful peaceful verse Silent One; so true about the blessing of a beautiful garden!~Che :)
Michael Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 4:49 AM
In silent love, you're one...Nice one SO
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 2:54 AM
I can so relate to the serenity within your words Silent. I feel the Divine spirit most when surrounded by nature. Beautiful! : )
Roper Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 10:24 PM
this is a bless for all of us thank you :) hugs eve
Ashley Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Indeed, Silent One. To be in harmony with Nature is to be in communion with God. The spiritual serenity and beauty of your poem is deep and meaningful. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Tripp Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 7:13 PM
So beautiful, Silent One.
Wanter Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Your mind spews out such beautiful thoughts.
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 2:24 PM
I love it! :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Lovely, SO.
Smith Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Lovely thoughts SO...
Y. Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Hi Silent, This is a good example for your contest. I found it to be serene and peaceful :-) Alexis
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 10:05 AM
I sit in my garden and know that this is true. With or without the G word. ;) I love it. And a new contest, ooh...
Gentile Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Peaceful, beautiful and uplifting verse, Silent One!!!
La France Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Silent, this is so good and dreamy, I love the image and the the song is breathtaking... what a great example for your contest ~
Dutta Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Again I missed your contest. Don't know How can I overlook? Must try this. Blessing n Best Wishes.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 8:25 AM
All the words won't be enough for a poet to express his heart and mind! Nevertheless, One word, One verse can be enough for an adept mind to pour out his heart! A won challenge Silent One! You thrive in the blessings of God when you are Silent you come close to God and be the One! Brilliant write! A FAV. Stay blessed.
Curtis Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 8:05 AM
True
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