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Blessed Treasures

Blessed Treasures

What blessed treasures in our kingdom of love thrive.
A love of four decades has grown and is still alive.
We have beaten the odds of half of marriages that end.
We may disagree at times, but always seem to mend.

I feel endearing love shared with me each and every day.
You calm my fears to instill hope, you always find a way.
Fatherhood fits you as a comfortable old worn glove.
Our children have always known the guidance of your love.

Now retired and at home, as we reach our golden years, 
Wrapped in youthful memories with wistful, joyful tears
We sustain each other through sickness and in health
And realize that our union contains the greatest wealth.

5-8-20

Regal Royal Relationships Poetry Contest~First Place~
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke 

Happy Mother's Day!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/2/2020 9:18:00 PM
A nice tribute to your husband and your years of marriage. Well written and enjoyed the read. love phyl
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/3/2020 5:52:00 PM
Thank you Phyl. The key we know is to put each other first. Blessings xxoo
Date: 5/27/2020 1:48:00 PM
What a wonderful write Connie a testament of your bond of enduring love, and shining example of your skill as a wordsmith. I marvel at this write and am glad it has received it's due and deserved recognition!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/3/2020 5:54:00 PM
I really appreciate your wonderful comment John. Marriage takes work from both parties. Thank you blessings xxoo
Date: 5/21/2020 10:29:00 AM
How beautiful Connie - a very deserved first place - 40 years - may you have many many more as happy and healthy as you have had so far - your union was blessed and smiled upon from up high from the day you got married - Enjoy all your wonderful family my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/21/2020 7:38:00 AM
This is a beautiful tribute to your husband and your marriage. Congrats on your win. Hugs, John
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Date: 5/19/2020 7:03:00 AM
Beautiful and witty. Words of gracious flow, developing extra limbs to double-embrace the mind.
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Date: 5/18/2020 11:05:00 AM
Great poem about the riches of love. So nice that you've endured the hardships to reap the blessings of commitment.
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Date: 5/16/2020 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win; it is wonderfully penned. A fantastic tribute my friend!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/16/2020 5:39:00 PM
Thank you very much Caren. xxoo
Date: 5/16/2020 1:34:00 AM
A lovely chronicle of the journey of your love and marriage - an endearing tribute, Connie! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/16/2020 5:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Sam. Have a great weekend and week! xxoo
Date: 5/15/2020 11:23:00 PM
Ah!! What a masterpiece!! This should be read by young couples!!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/16/2020 5:29:00 PM
I feel some young couples give up on their marriages too soon. The early years are often a challenge but we'll worth it. Thank you very much Swetha. Blessings xxoo
Date: 5/15/2020 6:24:00 PM
Connie, such a beautiful poem to share. For a marriage to survive 40 years is a Blessing. Congratulations on your winning placement and years of marriage. Hugs, Sonia.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/15/2020 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Sonia. Many years ago my husband asked an older gentleman who had been married many years "what is the secret of a long marriage?" The old man told him "Understanding"! I agree. xxoo
Date: 5/15/2020 11:36:00 AM
"We may disagree at times, but always seem to mend" explains the depth of this beautiful relationship in such a poignant way. Congratulations Connie :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/15/2020 1:18:00 PM
Marriage is a two way street. If both put each other first you will have a marriage that endures every obstacle. Thank you Aditi. Blessings xxoo
Date: 5/13/2020 11:32:00 AM
Top rate Pietry, Connie! Congratulations on a fulfilled married life. Crossing my fingers that you get top prize in Chantelle's contest. Panagiota xpxo
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/13/2020 4:25:00 PM
Thank you very much for your encouraging words Panagiota. xxoo
Date: 5/12/2020 8:43:00 PM
Hello Connie … to have love, respect, and trust for a lifetime is worth more than all the wealth in the world. We cannot buy it, so us lucky ones can certainly relate to this fine verse Connie - thank you - Lindsay
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/13/2020 4:28:00 PM
Exactly! We can take only our emotions with us when we depart. A happy marriage takes time, devotion and putting each other first. Thank you very much Lindsay. blessings xxoo
Date: 5/11/2020 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations! Time flies in good company, so enjoy the next decade! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/11/2020 1:15:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, Connie! True love.
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Date: 5/11/2020 12:05:00 PM
Very few relationships last so long - but it's indeed a treasure when it happens and worth holding on to! "Fatherhood fits you as a comfortable old worn glove". Endearing! Several people in my family have had relationships that lasted for several decades, only to end in divorce. Always seems so strange to me.
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Date: 5/11/2020 7:06:00 AM
Indeed a blessed treasure, Connie. There is a special harmony in your words that speaks to forever love. I enjoyed the sweet sentiments you expressed and I am saving this lovely poem in my FAVES.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/11/2020 11:27:00 AM
Love lives on after death in the next life. It is the kind of treasure you can take with you. Thank you so much for your loved very comment. I am honored by your fave. Blessings Vijay! xxoo
Date: 5/11/2020 2:47:00 AM
A lovely treasure you have Connie, there is nothing more precious than a solid relationship. Tom
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/11/2020 11:24:00 AM
I agree my friend. To walk through life together is a blessing. Thank you very much Tom. xxoo
Date: 5/11/2020 12:57:00 AM
True love is a blessing. What a sweet tribute to it, dear. Hugs
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/11/2020 11:20:00 AM
I agree. It takes cooperation and putting your mate first from both. Thank you very much Eileen. So nice to hear from you. xxoo
Date: 5/10/2020 11:24:00 PM
A beautiful story of a lifetime of love. It has a pleasing rhyme scheme, too. Good luck in the contest.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/11/2020 11:05:00 PM
I did, very much. Thanks. :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/11/2020 11:17:00 AM
It is easy to write about our long union. Thank you very much Evelyn. I hope you enjoyed Mother's Day. xxoo
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