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Lady, weave Your circle tight With a web of living light Earth and Air and Fire and Water Bind us to you. MacDermot, the Prince of Coolavin came to Connachta a fair maiden to win, as the maypole rose a redhead proclaimed, that to marry him, her heart was aflame; so life comes again with a slow spin. The pole is lifted and she beribbons him; merry as their red and white ribbons crossed wedded like wefts in the weave of the Lord's skein. MacDermot the Prince was right chivalrous. How the town folk of Sligo laughed and danced each youthful suitor had bells on their shoes. Eight at a time the couples round pranced every Da's hoped his daughter to loose. But, Meg the red had a mind to seduce, and the Prince, well the Prince, was Goddess crossed. Meg's lips were wine and he had but those two; MacDermot the Prince was right chivalrous. White for the virgin each Goddess blessed red for the God of the green woods so old green ribbons the forest, gold's sun's tressed all twirl round the royal wreath topped Maypole. Blessed is the tree, with honors foretold as maids and masters their ribbons criss-crossed while the Prince MacDermot held Meg; they strolled. MacDermot the Prince was right chivalrous. The Rune Inguz was read, they blessed all holds and the grand green hills were bereft of frost for spring was here and their vows were told. MacDermot the Prince was right chivalrous.

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Date: 2/21/2015 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations
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Date: 2/17/2015 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Debbie. What a lovely narrative in ballade form! Takes me back to the poetry of old. // paul
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Date: 2/17/2015 8:52:00 AM
What an excellent choice for top honors!
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Date: 2/16/2015 6:00:00 PM
Debbie, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**
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Date: 2/16/2015 4:00:00 PM
Debbie, my heartfelt congratulations to you for your deserved 1st Place win! Your poem is so descriptive and I enjoyed reading it so much. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/16/2015 11:50:00 AM
Life is Like a Maypole Debbie. Congrats on winning 1st place. God bless.
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Date: 2/16/2015 11:42:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:34:00 AM
Well done and many thanks for submitting such a lovely poem Debbie....Seren
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie, This is a beautiful poem and so worthy of 1st place. Hugs Janet
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Date: 2/9/2015 3:40:00 AM
I predict Seren will love this Debbie - such a beautiful descriptive write - reminds me of Arthur and Guinevere I have such vivid images in my head - fabulous write a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xx
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/9/2015 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Jan, it still needs work, but I was tired. I hope to work more on it today.
Date: 2/8/2015 9:23:00 PM
My friend, this is not only a great write but also a very inspiring one that is a joy to read. I love poetry in this style and its so well crafted with such a smooth flow. Adding this to my fav list and thanks... A7
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