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Bleeding love

Through the midnight blue of your eyes The glowing glory of the sun Rectifying this pure embrace As all worries are now shunned Silken haze of twilight Shinning through Is dazzling starlight Between my steady breaths Earth shakes away its scars Streaking knots of bitter sweetness Slaying old memories Amongst the inescapable horror Undignified escape I listed a thousand tears Then held tight to the beginning Letting the midnight blue of your eyes Radiate inside me Streaming with tears I surrendered Locked with you for eternity I shuddered and bled Wishing for another me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/9/2014 3:45:00 PM
Great poem, Little Known. Deep expressing with pure honesty, and good imagery. Enjoyable piece overall. Check out some of my newer poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 6/4/2014 5:08:00 AM
Thankyou I think it still needs work. It's not flowing for me as it should.
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Date: 6/4/2014 4:42:00 AM
Very expressive work that you have penned in this one...Sara
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