Blazing Evening Sun

Blazing evening sun
more ardent than lovers' lips
allows no sad sound
as the bright notes of robins
hate to bring night in


7/14/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 10:18 AM
Enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here today. I am happy to see you have shared a bit of your excellent writing with us today Andrew. Heres hoping you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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July 14, 2011 at 6:05 AM
Very nice Tanka...best wishes.
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July 14, 2011 at 4:17 AM
downright lyrical, andrew.. winning wishes to you! i like the way you set the tone here.. :) huggs, nette
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