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** In honor of ALL firefighters and first responders, risking their lives each day for our safety. **

Blazing Beast

The ground gaped garishly, gored with ghastly gouges of glowing, gravelly gobs ...

Finally unfettered from a frigid firmament, flames flung fiery, flaring fingers 
          ferociously forward ...

The blazing bastions bent on burning the backwood bluffs bare with bitter brutality ...

Unholy hoards of heated horror hailing the heavens with heinous, heckling howls of                           
          hellish hostility.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Swartz Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 4:21 PM
Wonderful imagery and your words are placed perfectly to make this poem amazing! This will do great for you in the contest my friend.
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December 9, 2017 at 11:31 PM
Very kind of you to say so, James, and I greatly appreciate your kindness and comments! Blessings, my friend! (My poem did NOT place - I think because I changed consonants in each new line).
Hamilton Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 1:39 PM
Amazing alliteration always astounds me! This one should do well in the contest, I smell a winner here with this piece, well done Greg!
Barden Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Glad you liked it, my friend, and I greatly appreciate the kindness! Blessings, Bro! :-)
S     Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 6:32 AM
This is amazing Greg!!! Your mastery of the English language never ceases to amaze me. A brilliant Alliteration!
Barden Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 9:13 PM
You're very kind to say so, Judy, and I so appreciate your wonderful comments! Blessings, friend! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Vivid imagery. Well done and GL, Gregory.
Barden Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Thank you so much, Line! :-)
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