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Blazing Beast

The ground gaped garishly, gored with ghastly gouges of glowing, gravelly gobs ...

Finally unfettered from a frigid firmament, flames flung fiery, flaring fingers 
          ferociously forward ...

The blazing bastions bent on burning the backwood bluffs bare with bitter brutality ...

Unholy hoards of heated horror hailing the heavens with heinous, heckling howls of                           
          hellish hostility.

Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden | Year Posted 2017

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James Swartz Date: 12/9/2017 4:21:00 PM Wonderful imagery and your words are placed perfectly to make this poem amazing! This will do great for you in the contest my friend. Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 12/9/2017 11:31:00 PM Very kind of you to say so, James, and I greatly appreciate your kindness and comments! Blessings, my friend! (My poem did NOT place - I think because I changed consonants in each new line).

John Hamilton Date: 12/6/2017 1:39:00 PM Amazing alliteration always astounds me! This one should do well in the contest, I smell a winner here with this piece, well done Greg! Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 12/6/2017 9:14:00 PM Glad you liked it, my friend, and I greatly appreciate the kindness! Blessings, Bro! :-)

Judith S Date: 12/6/2017 6:32:00 AM This is amazing Greg!!! Your mastery of the English language never ceases to amaze me. A brilliant Alliteration! Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 12/6/2017 9:13:00 PM You're very kind to say so, Judy, and I so appreciate your wonderful comments! Blessings, friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier Date: 12/6/2017 6:21:00 AM Vivid imagery. Well done and GL, Gregory. Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 12/6/2017 9:12:00 PM Thank you so much, Line! :-)