Eileen Manassian Poet Free verse

Blazing Across Your Sky

I’m going to blaze across your sky
In blinding light
My body a celestial meteorite
Falling from the heavens 
Pulled in by the gravity of your passion
Burning my way through the atmosphere of your essence
Escalating friction of your atoms against mine
Sparks flying
Temperatures rising to the inevitable climax
No way to stop this falling star of my love
This red hot comet of desire
As I blaze through you dreams and reality, fantasy and destiny
Hurtling at break neck speed as I incinerate my way
Through..........everything
Blazing, flaming, flaring, combusting
Till the final explosion
In the earth shattering impact of your embrace....

My voyage of passion.......complete

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Carl Fraser December 9, 2013 at 8:56 AM Whew! gotta go towel off after this one Eileen, very very great imagery here my friend, blessings, Carl Eileen Manassian December 9, 2013 at 9:38 AM HA HA! You make me smile! Thanks for the post, my dear. Hope you are all dry now.

Donna Jones December 8, 2013 at 8:57 PM OK you do this to your mama? Mama D? I'm panting here..haha...:-) :-) :-) you are something ...too bad there is only one of you...the world would be a much happier place filled with you!! Eileen Manassian December 9, 2013 at 9:39 AM MAMA! I'm sorry......I'm a naughty girl. Can I still have a cookie? HA HA! I took some brownies to class today. Students were so happy! Love you, MD! You rock!

Delysia Hendricks December 8, 2013 at 10:43 AM Whoa, whoa, girlfriend!!! You're going too fast and I need a ride with you. The Queen of Passion strikes again. You're on fire and you've outdone yourself this time. I'm off to the shower now. Huggies, girlfriend mine. Licia XOXOXOX Eileen Manassian December 9, 2013 at 9:42 AM HA HA HA HA! Licia.....you crack me up, woman! The QUEEN OF PASSION will slow down so you can hop on and we can blaze across the sky together....Ummmmm....Yea, that isn't ambiguous is it? HA HA HA! Dearie, you know what I mean. Hugs to you sweetie pie!

Liam Mcdaid December 8, 2013 at 7:05 AM blinding beautiful piece Eileen Manassian December 9, 2013 at 9:40 AM AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.........thanks ever so much, Liam. :)

Sarai Virden December 8, 2013 at 1:03 AM Hot, Hot, Hot.... A very sensual piece sweet one. Well done! Many hugs XOXOX Eileen Manassian December 9, 2013 at 9:38 AM Sweet one!!! I like that, Sarai. SWEET of you to post this lovely comment. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis December 6, 2013 at 11:47 AM Dearest Eileen, who would be able to withstand such heat without being incinerated by your passion? Only protons and electrons will be left, blessed though, by your divine descend! Me agape! Eileen Manassian December 6, 2013 at 2:10 PM Yasso, Demetri! Ti oraia egrapses gia mena. Efkharisto gia to menema sou. :) Mou ethoses ten chara me logia sou! Thank you, my dear poet, for this blazingly beautiful post!!! :) You are always full of kindness towards me. I do appreciate it so much!!! Me agapi!!!

Charmaine Chircop December 6, 2013 at 10:57 AM Truely passionate..I love your sweet romantic poems but I adore it when you roar girl.You write passion so deep. Eileen Manassian December 6, 2013 at 2:08 PM I do love roaring as well, Beautiful Charmaine! It gives me a great feeling of invincibility!!! Thank you for encouraging me! Hugs!

Richard Lamoureux December 6, 2013 at 9:55 AM Wow this is a powerful write.. You certainly lit up the sky. The Queen of passion rides again! I'm glad you are feeling invincible. Eileen Manassian December 6, 2013 at 10:44 AM Yes, Richard.......That is the story of my life....mountain peaks and valleys......When I'm on the mountain top...I try to let it last as long as possible! I'm there NOW! Happy!!!! Thanks for visiting, and for your comment. SO SO looking forward to Sunday's show! :)

Poet Tacito December 6, 2013 at 9:27 AM Eileen "Ride you like a comet in the night" Ghali. DIG IT! Explode away! =D Eileen Manassian December 6, 2013 at 9:42 AM AND WHAT A COMMENT IT IS!!!! Eileen Manassian December 6, 2013 at 9:41 AM I'm in this "I'm going o conquer the world" mood, Drake. I feel......invincible. Oh....it feels so good. I haven't felt this way in some time.........NOTHING can stop me now! ;) Thanks for reading and being the FIRST to comment! ;)