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Blazing Across Your Sky

I’m going to blaze across your sky In blinding light My body a celestial meteorite Falling from the heavens Pulled in by the gravity of your passion Burning my way through the atmosphere of your essence Escalating friction of your atoms against mine Sparks flying Temperatures rising to the inevitable climax No way to stop this falling star of my love This red hot comet of desire As I blaze through you dreams and reality, fantasy and destiny Hurtling at break neck speed as I incinerate my way Through..........everything Blazing, flaming, flaring, combusting Till the final explosion In the earth shattering impact of your embrace.... My voyage of passion.......complete Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Carl Fraser

Date: 12/9/2013 8:56:00 AM

Whew! gotta go towel off after this one Eileen, very very great imagery here my friend, blessings, Carl

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/9/2013 9:38:00 AM

HA HA! You make me smile! Thanks for the post, my dear. Hope you are all dry now.

Donna Jones

Date: 12/8/2013 8:57:00 PM

OK you do this to your mama? Mama D? I'm panting here..haha...:-) :-) :-) you are something ...too bad there is only one of you...the world would be a much happier place filled with you!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/9/2013 9:39:00 AM

MAMA! I'm sorry......I'm a naughty girl. Can I still have a cookie? HA HA! I took some brownies to class today. Students were so happy! Love you, MD! You rock!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 12/8/2013 10:43:00 AM

Whoa, whoa, girlfriend!!! You're going too fast and I need a ride with you. The Queen of Passion strikes again. You're on fire and you've outdone yourself this time. I'm off to the shower now. Huggies, girlfriend mine. Licia XOXOXOX

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/9/2013 9:42:00 AM

HA HA HA HA! Licia.....you crack me up, woman! The QUEEN OF PASSION will slow down so you can hop on and we can blaze across the sky together....Ummmmm....Yea, that isn't ambiguous is it? HA HA HA! Dearie, you know what I mean. Hugs to you sweetie pie!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/8/2013 7:05:00 AM

blinding beautiful piece

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/9/2013 9:40:00 AM

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.........thanks ever so much, Liam. :)

Sarai Virden

Date: 12/8/2013 1:03:00 AM

Hot, Hot, Hot.... A very sensual piece sweet one. Well done! Many hugs XOXOX

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/9/2013 9:38:00 AM

Sweet one!!! I like that, Sarai. SWEET of you to post this lovely comment. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/6/2013 11:47:00 AM

Dearest Eileen, who would be able to withstand such heat without being incinerated by your passion? Only protons and electrons will be left, blessed though, by your divine descend! Me agape!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/6/2013 2:10:00 PM

Yasso, Demetri! Ti oraia egrapses gia mena. Efkharisto gia to menema sou. :) Mou ethoses ten chara me logia sou! Thank you, my dear poet, for this blazingly beautiful post!!! :) You are always full of kindness towards me. I do appreciate it so much!!! Me agapi!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/6/2013 10:57:00 AM

Truely passionate..I love your sweet romantic poems but I adore it when you roar girl.You write passion so deep.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/6/2013 2:08:00 PM

I do love roaring as well, Beautiful Charmaine! It gives me a great feeling of invincibility!!! Thank you for encouraging me! Hugs!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/6/2013 9:55:00 AM

Wow this is a powerful write.. You certainly lit up the sky. The Queen of passion rides again! I'm glad you are feeling invincible.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/6/2013 10:44:00 AM

Yes, Richard.......That is the story of my life....mountain peaks and valleys......When I'm on the mountain top...I try to let it last as long as possible! I'm there NOW! Happy!!!! Thanks for visiting, and for your comment. SO SO looking forward to Sunday's show! :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/6/2013 9:27:00 AM

Eileen "Ride you like a comet in the night" Ghali. DIG IT! Explode away! =D

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/6/2013 9:42:00 AM

AND WHAT A COMMENT IT IS!!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/6/2013 9:41:00 AM

I'm in this "I'm going o conquer the world" mood, Drake. I feel......invincible. Oh....it feels so good. I haven't felt this way in some time.........NOTHING can stop me now! ;) Thanks for reading and being the FIRST to comment! ;)