Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Blazed Spectacle

S prawled beneath a line of stars, bright
P ulsating in varnished luster
E ndless jewels gleam, to ignite
C radled breaths as skylines flicker,
T eetering on mid evening’s hue...
A nd neon fireworks dash in a glide,
C lusters waltzing in blazed revue
U nmatched by shadows that divide;
L ight of moonglow, black of wind-streams
A s flashed novas explode up high,
R eeling on, till blinks fade..goodbye.


1/18/2016
Spectacular Acrostic
John Hamilton's Contest

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Arlene Smith February 19, 2016 at 3:03 PM Absolutely stunning my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A January 30, 2016 at 1:37 AM Nette, Congratulations on your wonderful win. X0X.... LINDA -

Faye Gibson January 24, 2016 at 4:25 PM Beautiful, Nette, as always; deserved a higher placement in my estimation. Congratulations.

Archana Garg January 22, 2016 at 7:56 AM Congrats dear Nette on your great win. Wonderfully knit Acrostic....

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 22, 2016 at 1:35 AM Congrats on ur awesome win with this spectacular write nette.

Viv Wigley January 22, 2016 at 12:33 AM As soon as I saw your name I knew this would be a real belter, nette, and you never disappoint. Lovely piece. Well done. Viv x

Pandita Sietesantos January 21, 2016 at 2:46 PM Congratulations, Nette, on a spectacular win! Pandita

Lin Lane January 21, 2016 at 2:08 PM Very nice acrostic, Nette!

Skat A January 21, 2016 at 12:45 PM Nette, Congratulations on your Spectacular Acrostic winning poem. Hugs **SKAT**

John Hamilton January 21, 2016 at 8:33 AM Really really enjoyed this Nette! congrats on nice 3rd place win!

Tim Smith January 19, 2016 at 5:08 PM terrific acrostic nette...let the fireworks begin

Kp Nunez January 18, 2016 at 11:27 AM Spectacular sight, spectacular write...I wish I may, I wish I might... (?) :-) Awesome quill as always, Nette...huggs

Carly Lalion January 18, 2016 at 9:42 AM Fireworks all aglow through your fine poetry!

Lyva Marty January 18, 2016 at 1:09 AM This is a sparkling poem and I like how spectacular the metaphors go--"Light of moonglow, black of wind-streams."

Beautiful Scars January 17, 2016 at 2:15 PM Nette a wonderful acrostic, will do well in the contest :) *Smiles* -luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2016 at 1:53 PM .... will send you an ocean of stardust ..... but not, goodbye .... au revoir .... - beautiful poem, Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jajosh Ongado January 17, 2016 at 1:28 PM This makes me starry-eyed as your dazzling poem glows with lustrous diction, then drifts off softly in the end. A fave on my short list!