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Blazed Spectacle

S prawled beneath a line of stars, bright P ulsating in varnished luster E ndless jewels gleam, to ignite C radled breaths as skylines flicker, T eetering on mid evening’s hue... A nd neon fireworks dash in a glide, C lusters waltzing in blazed revue U nmatched by shadows that divide; L ight of moonglow, black of wind-streams A s flashed novas explode up high, R eeling on, till blinks fade..goodbye. 1/18/2016 Spectacular Acrostic John Hamilton's Contest

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Date: 2/19/2016 3:03:00 PM
Absolutely stunning my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 1/30/2016 1:37:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your wonderful win. X0X.... LINDA -
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Date: 1/24/2016 4:25:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette, as always; deserved a higher placement in my estimation. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/22/2016 7:56:00 AM
Congrats dear Nette on your great win. Wonderfully knit Acrostic....
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:35:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this spectacular write nette.
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Date: 1/22/2016 12:33:00 AM
As soon as I saw your name I knew this would be a real belter, nette, and you never disappoint. Lovely piece. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 1/21/2016 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette, on a spectacular win! Pandita
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Date: 1/21/2016 2:08:00 PM
Very nice acrostic, Nette!
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Date: 1/21/2016 12:45:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your Spectacular Acrostic winning poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 1/21/2016 8:33:00 AM
Really really enjoyed this Nette! congrats on nice 3rd place win!
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Date: 1/19/2016 5:08:00 PM
terrific acrostic nette...let the fireworks begin
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Date: 1/18/2016 11:27:00 AM
Spectacular sight, spectacular write...I wish I may, I wish I might... (?) :-) Awesome quill as always, Nette...huggs
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:42:00 AM
Fireworks all aglow through your fine poetry!
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Date: 1/18/2016 1:09:00 AM
This is a sparkling poem and I like how spectacular the metaphors go--"Light of moonglow, black of wind-streams."
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Date: 1/17/2016 2:15:00 PM
Nette a wonderful acrostic, will do well in the contest :) *Smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/17/2016 1:53:00 PM
.... will send you an ocean of stardust ..... but not, goodbye .... au revoir .... - beautiful poem, Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/17/2016 1:28:00 PM
This makes me starry-eyed as your dazzling poem glows with lustrous diction, then drifts off softly in the end. A fave on my short list!
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