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Blatant Feelings In Rhyme

In my ultimate unnatural timidity, I must admit a bit of vulgar sublimity In my blatant disregard for femininity And my propensity for despising fake saccharinity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/25/2019 9:26:00 AM
Very clever write! Luv it.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2019 4:02:00 PM
I liked a couple of these words and Trixie said, "We can do this!" so we did.
Date: 2/24/2019 8:34:00 PM
Oh, this is wonderfully witty and potent in it's succincticity ... love it, Caren! :-) <3
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2019 9:36:00 PM
Thank you Gregory. I do not often have long words prancing in my head like this, but I did today.
Date: 2/24/2019 5:01:00 PM
Wow, I think you invented a new word "saccharinity" - I also disregard femininity - must Fav this immediately!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2019 9:36:00 PM
Hilariously, it is in the dictionary, Michelle, and I know for I looked it up to make sure!

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