Blatant Feelings In Rhyme

In my ultimate unnatural timidity,
I must admit a bit of vulgar sublimity
In my blatant disregard for femininity
And my propensity for despising fake saccharinity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Very clever write! Luv it.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 4:02 PM
I liked a couple of these words and Trixie said, "We can do this!" so we did.
Barden Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 8:34 PM
Oh, this is wonderfully witty and potent in it's succincticity ... love it, Caren! :-) <3
Krutsinger Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Thank you Gregory. I do not often have long words prancing in my head like this, but I did today.
Faulkner Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Wow, I think you invented a new word "saccharinity" - I also disregard femininity - must Fav this immediately!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Hilariously, it is in the dictionary, Michelle, and I know for I looked it up to make sure!
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