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Blanket of Fog

thick blanket of fog smothers visibility -- cars pile up

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/16/2012 11:03:00 PM
Ah, fog. That chaste cousin to the scourge oof cities. Nice piece. - Chuck
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Date: 3/2/2012 7:44:00 AM
It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Kim. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Your words are appreciated more then you know. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2012 2:43:00 PM
Love this haiku, Kim. Many congrats to you too, my friend : )
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Date: 1/18/2012 4:07:00 PM
nature takes its course, unforgiven...
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:53:00 PM
oh yes, now that is a haiku with a natural consequence.haha. Let me go see your other one!
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Date: 1/14/2012 5:59:00 AM
That is a sad one but well written..I hope that no one was hurt..Thanks for stopping by..I think that I have a cold..Sara
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:01:00 AM
That's for sure. I've seen it so thick you couldn't see more than a foot in front of you. At times like that it's best nnot to drive. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:21:00 PM
Kim, a wonderful haiku. Reminds so much of the mornings here in southern CA, Greg
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