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February 4, 2025



 

 

A breeze did slide in under eaves and stirred inside the air that grieves, my children grown my dreams have flown, alone I sit my rocking throne. My chair in front of window bare, I look… but husband’s soul elsewhere. Beneath my feet the floorboards moan, alone I sit my rocking throne. Each day I rock the same tic tock and change not from my sleeping frock. Once soft my face now turned a crone, alone I sit my rocking throne. The length of cobwebs measure time they speak no secret sing no rhyme, but air that’s stirred does tend to drone… alone, I sit my rocking throne. I pray to rock myself to sleep as old-age-chains do rust with weep. These tears from seeds of sorrows sown, alone I sit my rocking throne. The run of beads and crucifix will not unfix life’s mix of tricks. A rosary my rope and stone, alone... I sit my rocking throne. Of God I beg relief from grief, unbind my mind from mortal sheaf. This plea endures like sun bleached bone— alone I sit my rocking throne.

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Date: 3/22/2025 9:29:00 AM
What an exquisite form and you most certainly do it justice. So much imagery and emotion ~ Beautifully penned, Susan ~
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Date: 3/22/2025 9:57:00 AM
Dear Line, it's wonderful to see you. Thank you for your gracious visit and kind words. Your beautiful thoughts are certainly appreciated. Warmest wishes, dear poet.. ~Susan
Date: 2/11/2025 12:01:00 PM
My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, your mastery of images that paint your theme of depression and isolation are second to none. Heart rending! I love the opening image of the breeze. This poetic form perfectly reinforces this theme but I would expect nothing else from a master poet! In your final stanza I see a small recognition of faith - a reaching out to eternal consolation for "relief from grief!" Nice internal rhymes! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you blessings on wings of joy! Happy Valentine's Day, sweet poetry sis!
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Date: 2/13/2025 8:59:00 AM
My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, I'm so happy to see you! My apologies to you, my sweet poetry sis, for being out of touch lately. Life has been a wonderful whirlwind taking me away from PS. Thank you for sharing in this scene of forsaken loneliness. Your gemstone comments glitter in my eyes and lift my poetic spirit to the skies. I'm so glad to know you felt my poem, both on the poetic and emotional level.. but I would expect nothing less from a poetess with a golden heart and grand poetic finesse. Your best wishes and blessings are received with appreciation. I will be over to read your glorious poems very soon. Happy Valentine's Day to you too, sweet poetry sis! Warmest wishes sent on rays of sunshine.. ~Susan
Date: 2/7/2025 7:26:00 PM
It worries me that there are people who really live in this kind of despair. Old and forgotten. It's a sad thing. I praise your words that open the subject of elderl neglect.
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Date: 2/8/2025 7:48:00 PM
Dear Hilda, the beauty of your empathy shines in your thoughtful comments. Thank you for sharing in the emotions and imagery of this poem with me. Your visit is such a delight, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/7/2025 8:28:00 AM
Hi Susan, I love the theme and particularly the "Kyrielle" style so well identified by none other than the indominable poetess Andrea (and yourself of course). Every verse was pure perfection, and I especially loved the final verse. Kudos, Terrell
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Date: 2/8/2025 7:45:00 PM
Dear Terrell, thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. Your beautiful comments are treasured. I'm glad to know you enjoyed my poem. I am inspired by your kindness. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 2/6/2025 9:28:00 PM
I know I am much younger, but you know I can almost relate to this. It's amazing and beautiful work. Hugs
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Date: 2/8/2025 7:42:00 PM
Dear Paige, thank you for sharing in the emotions of this poem with me. I treasure your beautiful sentiments. Your empathy shines. Yes, I think that grief and loneliness is something that anyone of any age can relate too. These feelings are universal, but unfortunately, I think they are prevalent when people are aging alone. Glad you appreciated it my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/5/2025 1:32:00 PM
Beautifully done in Kyrielle style. Wow.
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Date: 2/5/2025 6:05:00 PM
Dear Andrea, I’m touched by your heartfelt comments. Your words are encouraging because I know how well you’ve mastered this form. Thank you, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/5/2025 10:21:00 AM
Dear Susan, Wow, this is hauntingly beautiful; grief and solitude written into each rocking motion. I love how the repetition deepens the ache, yet there’s a quiet strength in your words. A deeply moving reflection on time, loss, and longing. Truly powerful! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/5/2025 12:29:00 PM
Dear Daniel, it's wonderful to hear from you. Your beautiful comments illustrate the shining depths of your empathy. Thank you for sharing in the emotion and imagery of this poem with me. Your comments are inspiring and they are treasured. Warmest wishes always my dear poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 2/4/2025 1:35:00 PM
Susan your poem really touched my heart as it is so moving ,well written and so Incredibly beautiful my friend! Debx P.S….Love the title….it drew me in! X
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Date: 2/5/2025 9:54:00 AM
Dear Deb, your lovely comments truly touched my heart. Thank you for sharing in the emotions of this poem with me. I'm so glad you loved the title too.. it's so true how a good title can draw the reader in. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

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