Blank

"Blank" Tearing at my eyes. The sounds of the city, The echoes of the drums. Flickering Sun, Black and blue minutes. When you beat time, You can see through the expressions, And see each moment in the eyes of the people. But the snap back to reality, Brings the unwanted thoughts of loss, Of all the beauty that stopped, And the blanks that everyone saw.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 8, 2012 at 9:52 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Alex. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 12:42 AM
Alex. I like the flow of this..David
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