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Arthur Vaso

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White like the snow Ice stiffened limbs Reaching out No saviors about Snow flakes in the wind I reached and reached and reached Towards deaths cold hands Never to see her again I looked down Wine of bloods holocaust Flowing from my hands Unto the devils abode Whitest of Pyrenees days I died beside her departure Railroad tracks empty Bloodless heart Ashes black Butterfly born

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/30/2018 2:10:00 AM
Wow. You describe, what is still so unimaginable, so impossible to put into words and understanding. I am deeply touched by your poem. Thank you, Kai
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Date: 1/27/2018 11:27:00 PM
True brilliance Arthur! Great doesn't say enough for this poem. It is perfection. Advanced genius in thought and words.
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Date: 1/25/2018 5:06:00 AM
Very nice...the imagery at the end is fantastic...All the best Arthur
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Date: 1/25/2018 2:14:00 AM
Great standalone piece, vivid , bleak. Nicely done, Arthur. Regards, Viv
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Date: 1/24/2018 10:30:00 PM
Following you on IG and loving it.
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Date: 1/24/2018 5:33:00 PM
Did he cut his wrist? Silly boy!
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Date: 1/24/2018 8:10:00 AM
Beauty in each line ... art in each stanza ... in just few words, a poetry bonanza ...
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:26:00 AM
Wow Arthur! This is my favorite of your poems so far and one of your BEST! Brilliant my friend! It is going straight into my Faves! : )
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