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Blame Shame

The heck with right and wrong when summed for blame to tightly shackle fault as someone’s chain that rattles useless, guilt linked clinks of shame. As humans, imperfections steer each brain. All people ride the mortal erring train. Mistakes are not hot sparks for dramas flame, not cause for finger wagging shakes that strain, but growth invites we should unite to claim. Egos and thoughts may earth imbue our grain but they are worthless chaff in heaven’s reign. August 16, 2019

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Date: 9/8/2019 1:41:00 PM
Yay! I was hoping to see this on the winner's list CayCay! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/8/2019 9:54:00 AM
hi, Caycay, I am so happy you made the winner list. I noticed Connie too is on the list. Congrats. you really deserved it.
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Date: 9/7/2019 10:35:00 PM
CayCay, thank you for your GREAT entry. Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Date: 8/20/2019 10:55:00 AM
I predict this will come 1st in a sure win - a gem of a poem, a talented write by an amazing poetess. Hugs CayCay - Jenny.
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Date: 8/19/2019 3:29:00 PM
Excellent message in this poem, Caycay. You are one of the most thoughtful intelligent friends I know!!
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Date: 8/18/2019 9:05:00 PM
Truly, this is beyond excelkent. Best to you CayCay! You have a depth of understanding of the human spirit. Panagiota
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Date: 8/18/2019 4:40:00 AM
Wise observations on the futility of shame and blame, not to mention regret; skilfully and effectively expressed in this poem.
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Date: 8/17/2019 7:18:00 AM
The ending line is the moral of the story..very powerful write CayCay..message well delivered in potent words.
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Date: 8/17/2019 7:13:00 AM
people often are quick to point fingers and blame....i like the way you penned this one Cay Cay....wonderful write and read, good luck in the contest :) hugs
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Date: 8/16/2019 11:19:00 PM
Wow CayCay! A magnificent creation my friend! I hope to see this a top winner. xxoo
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