Blame It On the Moon

Underneath a magic moonlit night as 3 shooting stars take flight

          twinkling silver blue shimmers , it was the passionate love that night


          The moon and stars held a party and sent one of their own    

          a creation in the making , a star rising from one star fallen


          entranced with the magic night and my solider Fitton ~

          it was an Angel's decision a gift bestowed one to cherish and hold 


         Never a doubt in my mind through watching him grow well Fitton ~    

         Full of creativity and charm , the young women that follow him enchanted 

      
          character and wisdom , success driven , as the moon whispered one night

         This Son will be one all will know , he will be loved by many .. your gift given


         poetry in truth of fate on a magical moon lit night , a story told

          Blame it in on the moon , or blame it on love and desire Fitton ~

          I know I was chosen by he , Your given Mom and Dad in code ~

      For my Son in Film and 1st AD "House of last things " 3rd season of Grimm :)

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Date: 10/26/2013 6:58:00 PM
- Very well written - creative suggestions for contest Shanity. - Lovely poem, luck in contest!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:16:00 PM
Thank-you Anne Lise , I need to get caught up here on reading my Favorite writers poems , you are certainly one of them ! much love to you :)
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