Blame It On the Moon

Blame it on the moon


The moon, who’s intentions, I believe
Are not beyond her muses to deceive
Casting down her beams so they reflect
The postures and the features to perfect

For lovers meeting secret sets the scene
Colours dim and svelte will be her sheen
With shadows for effect she does create
So each believe they see their one true mate

The atmosphere she shrouds in mystery
Adding strings of unheard symphony
Sets the mood with melancholy strains
Removes all senses common from their brains

And yet I find myself, I’m not immune
With ease she has me dancing to her tune
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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James Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 12:51 PM
I love it
Manassian Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 2:15 PM
Beautiful..........
A  Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Richard, this is a pretty deep Blame It On The Moon poem.... congrats... LOVE ~SKAT~
Seal Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 2:56 PM
Hiya Skat, like the new avatar, you look very studious :) thanks for dropping in
Johnson Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 6:38 PM
Brilliant write. That conniving moon. Congratulations. Love,Joyce
Seal Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 2:55 PM
Long time no see Joyce, hope you're keeping well, thanks for your comment
Sirak Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 12:14 PM
Fantastic! Congrats on your win.
Seal Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 2:54 PM
Monterey, lovely name, Thanks for dropping by with your comment
Richards Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 6:31 PM
The moon, and your poem, are magic!! Well done!!! Congratulations Richard!
Seal Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 2:52 PM
Thank you Carrie, very nice comment, thank you so much
Adams Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 5:55 PM
beautifully crafted sonnet...congrats on your win with this fine poem!
Seal Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 2:51 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you and will be paying you a visit soon
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 1:11 PM
Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara
Seal Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 2:50 PM
Thanks Sara, pleased to see you
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 7:30 AM
A beautiful sonnet Richard congratulations on your win xx
Hendricks Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 11:18 AM
I thought I was the inspiration behind your poetry. lol. Beautiful ending with "she has me dancing to her tune". I see you won a contest with this one. Congratulations, Richard. Licia :-)
Manassian Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Lovely Richard! A wonderful romantic write! Loved it. I've written a haiku on the Gypsy Moon...always makes one dream
A   Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Stopping by to read this one again.... Love the way the loveliness makes you dance around her ways. Good imagery and emotions... Linda
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Very expressive and descritpive winning work.Congrats on your win..Sara
Jones Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 5:30 PM
Congratulations Richard a wonderful write...Donna
Carrillo Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 12:41 PM
Richard; This is beautiful. Congratulations. Many blessings. Lucilla
Johnson Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 6:04 PM
I really enjoyed this one. I think it should be in the no. 1 group. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 5:06 PM
Hi Richard, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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