Blame It On Love

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Blame it all on Love Should I follow the moon? Should I fall in love again? Would it not be too soon? Hate to fall in love in vain. Crazy to see the moon in broad daylight, While I strolled along the fine sandy bay. There walking towards me was a rare sight, One of my ex who always made me sway. Absurd how I forgot what made us part. Seems she was not so much angry with me Was it the strange moon that made my poor heart Pump hard that I had to rest at the quay. Celestial ghostly moon peering at me, Beauty holding my hand, sitting, staring, On the quay, drinking coffee, I agree The pale moon's pull brought me back her caring. Should I follow the moon? Should I fall in love again? Would it not be too soon? Hate to fall in love in vain. Alas I'm a sucker for all beauties, Forgot the past, now I still adore her, I pledge that from now on no more cuties, The moon and my cute ex I now prefer.

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 1/22/2021 8:48:00 AM

I think love gets us all at some point. Wonderful poem with perfect rhymes :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/18/2021 12:09:00 PM

Hi Victor, I really enjoyed your well-written lyrics. I found them to be romantic as well.Taking a chance on love is a risk, but if one finds love, it was worth the risk. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Mike Bayles

Date: 1/17/2021 6:16:00 PM

I like this Victor, and the structure. And how true- love is a crazy thing.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/17/2021 8:37:00 AM

Hi there I think most men are suckers for beauty, glad you made up with your ex (fiction or fact) - great romantic nostalgic poem. Hugs and blessings my friend. Jennifer.

Peter Dome

Date: 1/16/2021 3:29:00 PM

Love this my friend. well done. I'm a sucker for beauty too.Pete.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2021 8:57:00 AM

Great romantic verse, Victor. Our past is part of us and we cannot forget those feelings for those that still linger. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/16/2021 3:28:00 AM

This is a sweet lyric Victor. ~ Ani

Judy Ball

Date: 1/15/2021 11:37:00 PM

Love this Victor. Filled with sweetness and happiness. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/15/2021 8:21:00 PM

Your poem conjures the pleasantest, most romantic images, Victor. Love the red sunset picture, too. :=)

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/15/2021 5:40:00 PM

I love love this. Beautiful and sweet! And yes, love is such a great feeling, you can't help it but let it fills your heart. For love is what makes us happiest of all :)