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Blackout Poetry- Surreal

He shakes his head against the linoleum. I watch him rinse his mug with my eyes closed before the sound of the mug shatters into pieces just like the occasion. I stare at him for a moment, a ghost. I thought I heard him raise his eyebrows. I just dropped my head. "You're not real. You're dead." 2-21-2021 Credit: Someone You Love Is Gone by Gurjinder Basran, Page 17

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Date: 2/23/2021 5:02:00 PM
Love the dark, bizarre aspect of this one! ~ Salva Door Dolly
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 2/23/2021 7:04:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. I bought this book at the dollar store just for this purpose. It was fun trying to find poems from sporadic words and phrases throughout the page.

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