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Blackberry

It's early yet for picking, Only one black kiss At the end of pinky clusters, First fruit, Faceted like flies' eyes. The biggest are up too high, In too far, where snakes live. Somebody could lose their balance, Fall inside. Somebody could get trapped in brambles. She used to go blackberrying. At five o'clock on summer mornings, She'd put on Dad's old overalls with the Legs rolled up. The rattle of buckets and baskets. We scorned her jams. "Can't we Have jam from the store instead?" Matching our distain to guilt at the Sun-red face Returning, the long scratches on her arms. She's gone now but the scene replays, Greenberry, whiteberry, redberry, black! Like part of a promise held out; the rest is Mine to keep. I see berry, berry, berry until I sleep.

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Date: 6/22/2022 12:57:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me delight in virtually "blackberrying." God bless you.
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 6/22/2022 1:04:00 AM
How kind of you, Beata. Don't mind the scratches; it's always worth it! Elizabeth McCann
Date: 6/21/2022 10:05:00 AM
This poetry was extremely nicely written, and I enjoyed reading it very much. You did a fantastic job of illustrating how our childhoods are ingrained not only in our minds but also in the way we behave, which is something that affects all of us. Many thanks for the uplifting comments you've left on my page.
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 6/22/2022 1:00:00 AM
Oh, thank you Sotto Poet. It's so great to be understood as well as to understand. Elizabeth McCann
Date: 6/21/2022 12:01:00 AM
"scene replays" - Life! Congratulations!
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 6/21/2022 4:07:00 AM
Christuraj So glad to meet you in my scene! Thank you! Elizabeth
Date: 6/17/2022 11:25:00 PM
I love this poem about your childhood memory Elizabeth…..well written . Debx
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 6/18/2022 4:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, Deb. Your comments are precious to me. You're taking on such big issues yourself!

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