Blackberry

It's early yet for picking,
Only one black kiss 
At the end of pinky clusters, 
First fruit, 
Faceted like flies' eyes.

The biggest are up too high, 
In too far, where snakes live. 
Somebody could lose their balance,
Fall inside. 
Somebody could get trapped in brambles.

She used to go blackberrying. 
At five o'clock on summer mornings, 
She'd put on Dad's old overalls with the
Legs rolled up. 
The rattle of buckets and baskets.

We scorned her jams. "Can't we
Have jam from the store instead?"
Matching our distain to guilt at the
Sun-red face 
Returning, the long scratches on her arms.

She's gone now but the scene replays,
Greenberry, whiteberry, redberry, black!
Like part of a promise held out; the rest is
Mine to keep.
I see berry, berry, berry until I sleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Agustin Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 12:57 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me delight in virtually "blackberrying." God bless you.
Mccann Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 1:04 AM
How kind of you, Beata. Don't mind the scratches; it's always worth it! Elizabeth McCann
Poet Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 10:05 AM
This poetry was extremely nicely written, and I enjoyed reading it very much. You did a fantastic job of illustrating how our childhoods are ingrained not only in our minds but also in the way we behave, which is something that affects all of us. Many thanks for the uplifting comments you've left on my page.
Mccann Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 1:00 AM
Oh, thank you Sotto Poet. It's so great to be understood as well as to understand. Elizabeth McCann
Alex Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 12:01 AM
"scene replays" - Life! Congratulations!
Mccann Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 4:07 AM
Christuraj So glad to meet you in my scene! Thank you! Elizabeth
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June 17, 2022 at 11:25 PM
I love this poem about your childhood memory Elizabeth…..well written . Debx
Mccann Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 4:09 AM
Thank you so much, Deb. Your comments are precious to me. You're taking on such big issues yourself!
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