Black, White, and Blood-Red All Over

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Why is there fog, thick with grim
from the breath of pursed lips
that blemishes the view 
distorting the glass?....I ask you
Is there a peaceful place for the soul?

I stand by the window and peer through the blinds
The wind whips  trees  and muddles the mind
something sails through the dark  with a thump I can hear
leers up at me with hopeless blind-sight,..   and tends once again
to instill me with fear

A tendril of grass from the devil's own hand
snakes its way up the porch
beyond the first step
And there….lies intrusion
an anthill away, ..it comes every day
to dim all the light       …… no peace for the soul, blood red ever flows

There is always a grim taste of nightmarish reality,
It is not an illusion
a voice too inhuman….it reeks of the devil
not a game to be played
I can't hide like an ostrich…..but maybe I should

Deceit mixed with truth, only death in pursuit
Which has now been cloven by the worst of mankind
Now waits on the stoop
Rumpled and bound for the weary to find

Have I triumphed from fear
when I open the door
A slit to peek out, 
take what lies at my feet?

What is black, what is white
what is read, bloody red
bringing dread, bringing grief
No solace, relief
Am I weak, without will, a moth drawn to the flame?
What is sane? What is real?
Where is peace for the soul?
There is death at my door
Always more, always more

…..where, Oh dear Lord, is there peace for the soul?


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9/14/16
Scare Me Good Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/19/2017 9:14:00 AM
sadly true, great write
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Date: 10/19/2016 6:42:00 PM
Well done and congrats on your placement
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Date: 10/8/2016 7:54:00 AM
What a captivating piece,Carrie...Congrats on your well deserved win...Kudos to you...
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Date: 10/7/2016 1:47:00 PM
No peace for the soul to be found here. Very chilling tone and captivating to boot. Love it
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:28:00 AM
amazing Carrie! this is just outstanding and brought chills up my spine...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/7/2016 9:16:00 AM
Carrie, a fascinating description of the every day horror felt by a person with an anxiety disorder such as agoraphobia. Barely able to do a task as simple as opening the door to get the news paper. A wonderful write.
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Date: 10/7/2016 8:07:00 AM
It was not easy choosing a second place poem/narrative out of so many worthy entries. This tale of terror dredged up images of The Evil Dead and The Cabin In The Woods (a Lovecraft inspired story, btw). The ambiguity of the evil and expert writing helped push this disturbing Free Verse to a second place win. Congrats, Carrie! :-)
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Date: 9/17/2016 5:29:00 AM
how powerful and thought-provoking, carrie..i adore this gritty side of you, ohh wow!..huggs
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