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Black Waves

Black Waves are coming They come crashing to the shore My eyes reflect them

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Date: 7/16/2017 2:12:00 PM
Cool haiku, Maria. Love how this poem ends, the waves of a brave poem come crashing in on my eyes. Delightful poem, preparing a heart for what? O my, tell us more. Love always.
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Maria Williams
Date: 7/17/2017 2:32:00 AM
When you look into my eyes that is...Maria
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Date: 7/17/2017 2:31:00 AM
Well you will have to tell me, after all each viewer will perceive a different story, or so I'm told ? Just kidding Freddie, thank you so much for your delightful visits and comments...Maria
Date: 4/22/2017 5:18:00 PM
The imagery works well, Maria, and so does the end line! #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 5/2/2017 9:53:00 PM
Sorry for replying so late Paul - I really do appreciate your rating.
Date: 4/22/2017 6:15:00 AM
Vivid image
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Date: 5/2/2017 9:52:00 PM
Thanks Kim, sorry for the late reply
Date: 4/18/2017 8:31:00 PM
Hi Maria. I have to admit. The title caught my attention. Nature and forces are powerful and ever changing. I found this expressive and clever how the reflections the waves and your eyes reveal the same. It was also interesting you chose black. Thus the dark side. Well done including the format itself.
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Date: 3/15/2017 11:09:00 AM
They say the eyes are the mirror to the soul. Are you pushing away the darkness of the waves? Amitiés
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Date: 3/16/2017 7:07:00 AM
Not anything so ominous as that Anne-Marie. I'm building up to a series of a 'not so happy Mother Nature - rattling her chains'. Thanks for your appreciation.
Date: 3/13/2017 12:02:00 PM
profound haiku..Loved it-Welcome to ps-Charma : )
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Date: 3/13/2017 10:44:00 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome Charmaine. Its a great site to be on, thank you.
Date: 3/13/2017 1:43:00 AM
Fabulous Haiku Maria.
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Date: 3/13/2017 3:44:00 AM
Thanks Manoj, I'm glad you liked it
Date: 3/13/2017 1:27:00 AM
Great haiku, fabulous imagery in a few words. Well done Maria
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Date: 3/13/2017 3:43:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth I appreciate your kind words