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Black Scarlet (Love In the 2nd Degree)

are we crazy or just contrived lazy or simply self-involved? are we insignificant, significant or just like everyone else deranged on the outside swimming through dead oceans in our heads am i death or am i over-simplified is my breath as thick as the painted eye lashes that stick to your eyes? are you in love with your anemia or anemic to love breathing came so easy now you're lucky to get one mouthful forever in ruins or ruined to become pinned to pages or pinned under thumb like the bleeding nape of a baby thorough true to yourself under circumstance we are death-like only because we know we can the heart like a thick abscess of black mucus pumping sweet death to all who may ask now clogged with regret regret for the living regret for the loving love of anemia anemia of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 12/17/2008 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations Val on your poem making through the first round. Good Luck in the next round. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 11/30/2008 7:37:00 AM
Val - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/12/2008 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:23:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/8/2008 10:39:00 AM
Val - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 8/1/2008 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/30/2008 3:17:00 PM
Hi Val, nice to meet you! A awsome poetic write. Enjoyed your witty vision. Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/30/2008 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Val. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2008 8:25:00 AM
It's been a while, Val. Congratulations on this one being featured. Hope all is well. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 7/28/2008 5:29:00 AM
Your poetic play on words was right on and awesome. Amazing write. Congrats on being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/27/2008 6:38:00 PM
Your poem was very deep and very beautiful - interesting and intelligent - congrats on the feature
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