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Black Rose

A black rose once bloomed, In a garden doomed, To hear jeering laughter, Slave of the white master, Cry, for rose bushes have thorns, Laugh, for there are roses on bushes of thorns, White’s grown common, see the unique, Make them belong that’s the trick, Often abused, hurt and exploited, Harshly spoken to, tactlessly treated, These buds are not allowed to gloom, Dipped often by birth in gloom, Discriminated for race and colours, Plucked before age these tender flowers, Hear their thoughts now.... ~ As I strolled through the woods, I heard a sign and then my name, Called ever so softly and then the sign again, It came from high above the treetops hoods, A bird, a ghost or a ghoul, Thoughts of beings good and foul, But what a relief at the end of this stupid belief, All it was, was my inner voice, Moaning, tired of pretence elegance and poise, It wanted the freedom of a free soul, To run free and wild, Burning hot as coal, Yet innocent as a child, It wanted to say what it had suppressed, Mute and meek, It has been pressed, Finally deciding to freedom seek, I gave it its desired freedom, For I myself was battling for my kingdom, From pretending for this world, Hiding myself like a nested bird, But I am now free, You can’t tame me, Until I wish to be. 06/09/2020 I Can’t Breathe Poetry contest

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Date: 6/16/2020 6:54:00 AM
Rashi, well done. A fine poem and placement on a sensitive theme. Congrats. Mohan
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Rashi Soni
Date: 6/16/2020 9:22:00 AM
Thank you so much for this comment. Rashi
Date: 6/15/2020 10:30:00 AM
Rashi, well stated with excellent imagery and powerful emotion. Please continue to write about your perspective, it is how others like me can learn. Congratulations on your top placement ~ John
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Rashi Soni
Date: 6/16/2020 2:04:00 AM
Thanks for your supporting and uplifting comment, John. Thanks for the congrats as well. Rashi
Date: 6/15/2020 7:37:00 AM
You are very welcome. Do drop by for a visit. ;0)
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Date: 6/16/2020 1:19:00 AM
Surely will. Thank you so much. Rashi :)
Date: 6/14/2020 10:36:00 AM
This is so moving and deserving of the high placement. Thanks for entering my contest. Blessings Richard.
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Rashi Soni
Date: 6/15/2020 5:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comment and my placement in your contest. I’m glad you thought it as worthy enough. Thanks again. Rashi
Date: 6/10/2020 2:24:00 PM
A deep impression of freedom with a strong memory. God bless you for your powerful words Rashi :)
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Rashi Soni
Date: 6/10/2020 11:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Aditi for your kind and encouraging comment. Rashi :)

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