Black Opal

Your mood was as black as the opal
Your eyes sparked of the fire of red and green
One of the rarest stones on the planet
The most rare is what you are to me

Words can’t express the intensity
The impact this precious stone evolves
The knowledge you’re my own beauty
*Silicone, hydrogen, oxygen are not involved

I would wear you close to my body
On a chain resting on my chest
Let the warmth of those black moods
Keep me smiling as you lay there at rest

If I was a rich man a ring I would buy
Made of this precious composition
For you to wear, so that people can see
You’re precious, though of a moody disposition


*Black Opal
The brilliant play of colour, or "fire," in these dark gems, along with their relative scarcity, causes them to be worth over $2300 per carat.
Composition of a Black Opal: Silicon, Hydrogen, Oxygen | Market Value: $2,355 per carat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Great write, a creative take on the challenge. I loved it.
Roberts Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 1:45 PM
Thanks Maurice ...Seren
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 8:10 AM
I really enjoyed reading this Serena. I love that last line.
Roberts Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 12:35 AM
Brenda glad you liked it ....Seren
Lamoureux Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 7:42 AM
You have educated me. I really enjoyed this piece Seren.
Roberts Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 12:34 AM
Thank you Richard...Seren
Chircop Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 12:49 AM
: )I really liked this one dear Serene ..(Serenu here? : ).Lovely poem
Roberts Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 1:07 AM
Hello Charmaine, many thanks for your comment...Seren
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