Black Onyx

Onyx dark silicate, descendant of agate echoes inspired by nighttime sky; a calming focus of the deepest void, spiritual transformation awakening the soul, translucent black onyx. Black hole transmigration, transformational sight, the never ending seeing eye vision of Tetragrammaton essence; majesty of heaven’s splendor enlightened souls will fly darkness alight, black hole.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/17/2022 2:39:00 PM

You love black onyx, which I understand for they ward off negativity, a sweet tribute

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/18/2022 1:33:00 PM

It's quite a beautiful stone. Thanks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2022 3:56:00 AM

Well, I am not sure what the black holes in the heavens are and why they are there. This is interesting thoughts penned about the topic. I have always thought that black onyx makes a nice stone set in a jewelry piece. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/15/2022 12:51:00 PM

Thanks, I love imagining what is out there.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/9/2022 8:25:00 PM

FAVE Time, M.L. This is profound penning to the max. I'm so awestruck, only cliches come to mind, as it were. ~ Gershon

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/15/2022 12:51:00 PM

Thank you Gershon, I do love space.

Constance La France

Date: 2/9/2022 3:59:00 PM

ML, beautifully penned, I love your poem ~Constance

Susan Lawrence

Date: 2/9/2022 10:24:00 AM

M.L., Just beautiful… so spiritual and emotional . I love it ! A fav ! Can’t wait to read it again . I love A calming focus of the deepest void . Hugs, Susan :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/15/2022 12:52:00 PM

Thanks so much, Susan.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/8/2022 7:56:00 PM

Nicely done, M.L. . Blessings.

Bill Baker

Date: 2/8/2022 3:53:00 PM

Well written Rictameter, M.L. I've never tried to write one of these. I may give it a try. Thanks for your visit and for sharing your poetry. I read your quotes and liked them all. I have a deep interest in spiritual growth, verse religion and religious growth. Spent 60 years doing the later. Write On! Bill

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/15/2022 12:52:00 PM

Thanks Bill, it wasn't easy learning for some reason, but I was stubborn enough to not let the form defeat me. Glad you enjoyed and good luck with writing one.

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/8/2022 3:23:00 PM

So gorgeous! I love black onyx and you make me love it more with this stunning write. More power on your pen.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/18/2022 1:33:00 PM

Oh good, enjoy and thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2022 2:00:00 PM

An introspective piece I feel from this wonderful poem you have created M.L. I love it! “ spiritual transformation awakening the soul,” I am saving this gem to my Faves! Blessings xxoo

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/15/2022 12:53:00 PM

Thanks so much Connie.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/7/2022 10:37:00 AM

Very nicely done! Enjoyed! Aloha!