M. L. Kiser Poet Rictameter

Black Onyx

Onyx
dark silicate,
descendant of agate
echoes inspired by nighttime sky;
a calming focus of the deepest void,
spiritual transformation
awakening the soul,
translucent black
onyx.

Black hole
transmigration,
transformational sight,
the never ending seeing eye
 vision of Tetragrammaton essence;
majesty of heaven’s splendor
enlightened souls will fly
darkness alight,
black hole.

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Caren Krutsinger February 17, 2022 at 2:39 PM You love black onyx, which I understand for they ward off negativity, a sweet tribute M. L. Kiser February 18, 2022 at 1:33 PM It's quite a beautiful stone. Thanks.

Sara Kendrick February 11, 2022 at 3:56 AM Well, I am not sure what the black holes in the heavens are and why they are there. This is interesting thoughts penned about the topic. I have always thought that black onyx makes a nice stone set in a jewelry piece. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara M. L. Kiser February 15, 2022 at 12:51 PM Thanks, I love imagining what is out there.

Gershon Wolf February 9, 2022 at 8:25 PM FAVE Time, M.L. This is profound penning to the max. I'm so awestruck, only cliches come to mind, as it were. ~ Gershon M. L. Kiser February 15, 2022 at 12:51 PM Thank you Gershon, I do love space.

Constance La France February 9, 2022 at 3:59 PM ML, beautifully penned, I love your poem ~Constance

Susan Lawrence February 9, 2022 at 10:24 AM M.L., Just beautiful… so spiritual and emotional . I love it ! A fav ! Can’t wait to read it again . I love A calming focus of the deepest void . Hugs, Susan :) M. L. Kiser February 15, 2022 at 12:52 PM Thanks so much, Susan.

Eve Roper February 8, 2022 at 7:56 PM Nicely done, M.L. . Blessings.

Bill Baker February 8, 2022 at 3:53 PM Well written Rictameter, M.L. I've never tried to write one of these. I may give it a try. Thanks for your visit and for sharing your poetry. I read your quotes and liked them all. I have a deep interest in spiritual growth, verse religion and religious growth. Spent 60 years doing the later. Write On! Bill M. L. Kiser February 15, 2022 at 12:52 PM Thanks Bill, it wasn't easy learning for some reason, but I was stubborn enough to not let the form defeat me. Glad you enjoyed and good luck with writing one.

JC Brul February 8, 2022 at 3:23 PM So gorgeous! I love black onyx and you make me love it more with this stunning write. More power on your pen. M. L. Kiser February 18, 2022 at 1:33 PM Oh good, enjoy and thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong February 8, 2022 at 2:00 PM An introspective piece I feel from this wonderful poem you have created M.L. I love it! “ spiritual transformation awakening the soul,” I am saving this gem to my Faves! Blessings xxoo M. L. Kiser February 15, 2022 at 12:53 PM Thanks so much Connie.

Rico Leffanta February 7, 2022 at 10:37 AM Very nicely done! Enjoyed! Aloha!