Black Muzzled Thoughts

The forest exploded,
A deer and fawn poured out of the green
like Brown streaks of lightning,
(wide, alien-eyed) 
They jumped so high
they brushed against Jesús's feet.
Men with plaid shirts, orange vests, and black muzzles came next.
Stalking, looking for blood drips.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 27, 2012 at 4:47 PM
Congrats on your deserved poem featured...patrick
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