Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Ode

- Black Love -

Morning glory
                                               The body is blunt
                                               Thinking of you
                                               before I awake
                                               Stretching my body
                                               Eyes are closed
                                               Can feel your scent
                                               Gently open my eyes
                                               Feel your aroma                                      
                                               The taste on my lips
                                               As a soft kiss                                       
                                               Your scent fills the room
                                               Thought of you,
                                               makes me awake
                                               You are perfect
                                               Heats my body
                                               Embracing you 
                                               Tasting you ... gently                         
                                               A moment of pleasure
                                               Without cream
                                               Without sugar
                                               Black morning coffee




09.06.2013

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Alexis Y. December 11, 2016 at 10:29 PM Hi Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2016 at 4:59 PM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues December 11, 2016 at 5:00 PM With closed then opened eyes, taking in the senses! Thank you for entering my contest and congrats, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2016 at 4:58 PM - Thanks for my win, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen May 4, 2015 at 5:34 PM Very great,interesting poem Great work. Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2015 at 2:46 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, Afolabi - greatly appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 2, 2014 at 7:00 PM one last thing.....s e v E N! Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2014 at 5:55 AM - Thank you, JSL !!!!

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 2, 2014 at 6:59 PM what a little roller coaster you took me on with a trick ending! You sneak! Well, sadly, it is dinner time and I gtg, for now. I will be back to read more ASAP! Hope I didn't annoy the hell out of you tonite! Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2014 at 5:54 AM - I'm pleasantly surprised :))) - You've spent a lot of time on my poems - Highly appreciate your visit JSL !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin January 1, 2014 at 9:56 AM Your writing is a wake up call! I'm headed to Starbucks! 7 hugs, chuck Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2014 at 11:28 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, Chuck - greatly appreciate your comments! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Nwabeke September 23, 2013 at 10:07 AM I bet this poem has drowned me in a sea of LOVE scented air. Bravo! Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2013 at 10:21 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Victor. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Ramacher August 31, 2013 at 5:09 AM And here I thought I was the only poet who loved coffee enough to write about it, hahaha. Join the coffee club! We are talking coffee right? Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2013 at 5:17 AM - Yes, black coffee my friend :)))) I will join the "coffee Club"- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Sandra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Scott August 23, 2013 at 12:02 PM LOVE YOUR WRITE MATE VERY CLEVER METAPHORES USED VERY SENSUAL TOO XXX DAVIDSCOTT THANKS FOR YOUR LOVLY WORDS ON MINE Anne-Lise Andresen August 23, 2013 at 12:04 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A July 9, 2013 at 9:53 PM I am liking this poem very much..... sweet and good taste.... PD Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2013 at 2:19 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Linda, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock June 21, 2013 at 9:49 PM Did not catch the title tell the end. Nicely done on this romantic piece. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen July 7, 2013 at 4:36 PM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Phyllis, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andy Ellsworth June 20, 2013 at 1:08 PM I've liked all of your writes... but this one is dear to my heart. Enjoying my second cup of the morning. No cream, no sugar. :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 20, 2013 at 2:18 PM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Andy, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sapna Beriwal June 20, 2013 at 1:19 AM you proved it 'love has fragrance'....keep writing in all phases of life. Anne-Lise Andresen June 20, 2013 at 1:20 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Sapna, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jane Smith June 19, 2013 at 5:51 PM Wow. I really like it! Thank you for the welcoming. Your poem is very creative. Also, could you help me with what kinds of poems I have? i never know what to call them so i say blank verse. Ill look forward to seeing more of your poems. I also made another poem if you'd like to read it. Anne-Lise Andresen June 20, 2013 at 12:44 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Cassidy, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherie Thomas June 18, 2013 at 4:55 PM I love this write anne.....really cool!!!:) lol I like my coffee light and sweet... Anne-Lise Andresen June 19, 2013 at 2:05 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Cherie, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo June 18, 2013 at 7:57 AM Anne Lise; I love your poem, but I like my coffee with cream and sugar. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2013 at 9:37 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Lucilla !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey June 16, 2013 at 7:48 PM Oh my... you really love your coffee... ha ha... so well written that I was thinking anything BUT coffee. Seductive :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2013 at 2:57 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Karen !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard D Seal June 14, 2013 at 7:25 PM Very cheeky poem Anne Lise, leading me up the garden path for ....... a coffee lol. very good write and funny. Take care, Richard Anne-Lise Andresen June 15, 2013 at 1:53 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Richard !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Morrison June 14, 2013 at 9:58 AM Until this very moment I never thought of my morning coffee as sexy. Perhaps I should try drinking it black! What A Excellent Write! Kim Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2013 at 10:22 AM - Black is sexy, Kim !!! - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Kim !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Rose June 14, 2013 at 9:17 AM Sexy coffee haha! Next time I have a cup I will be sure to drink it more sensually, like a crazy love affair :) Love your work! I wish I could write like this. Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2013 at 10:21 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Andrea !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso June 14, 2013 at 12:14 AM Made me smile, have to introduce you to the sins of Tim Hortons!!!!!! Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2013 at 1:32 AM Who is: T.Hortons ? - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Arthur!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Annie Lander June 12, 2013 at 1:27 PM We all need that Black Love in the morning and sometimes throughout the day thank you for the wake up.. Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2013 at 1:28 PM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Annie !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mario De Paz June 12, 2013 at 10:42 AM It is the hymn to black coffee I prefer because it is involving and full of luxury too. A lot of fantasy and of good humour Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2013 at 10:44 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Mario !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda June 12, 2013 at 7:16 AM This poem uses all the body senses-- clever too. Loved it X Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2013 at 7:17 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Kim !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2013 at 11:07 PM oooh, what a cool way to say it, black love!! Creative. Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2013 at 1:20 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Andrea!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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