Black Jack

Black Jack dealers
Counting money
Dealing the cards
Effortlessly,
Taking all my money!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 10:00 AM
I've never been to a casino, but I heard roulette was quite fun! My advice is to only take a little bit of cash with you to the casino... funny piece! Speaks of gambling addiction quite 'effortlessly'!
Harper Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 6:23 PM
Right on the money, I can share this experience.
Essence Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 4:36 AM
lol this was fun to write glad you liked it!! :)
Wesley Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 9:00 PM
I bought a lottery ticket once and got mad when I didn't win so it's best I don't get into cards. I love the "effortlessly" part, it says sooo much!
Wesley Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 9:00 PM
I bought a lottery ticket once and got mad when I didn't win so it's best I don't get into cards. I love the "effortlessly" part, it says sooo much!
Essence Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 4:33 AM
Oh yeah, lol they do take my money effortlessly lol thanks for stopping by :D
Jones Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 9:13 PM
Nicely done...and been there done that!
Essence Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 4:28 AM
Thank you ;D yeah me too lol
The Gypsy King Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 3:59 AM
Your ABC poem rocks baby
Essence Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 4:14 AM
Thanks for encouraging me to write it xo
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