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Black Jack

The wearing of the green damn, if it doesn’t remind me of you of the swashbuckling laggard you were and the ripple of muscle across your broad back the salt and pepper curls on your chest and whiskers tickling my ear. Ireland’s proud son bereft on the shores of New England, sullen as only the Irish can be. Black hearted when you wanted to be too. Ah, but I saw the pot of gold The twinkle in your eye, the swagger of your copper tone hips, your tree trunk thighs and the strength in your smiths hands. Always a good ride you were. Sure’n even the devil could takes tips from your mischievous heart. Yet, you were Mommy’s boy, only one woman good enough for you and none you’d let near enough to her throat to cut the cord. A right fine banshee of a woman, a toothless woman with a vipers bite. And she’ll keep her bonnie boy lashed to her until the day she dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/10/2011 7:27:00 PM
Poor lad. Needs a couple of Guinness Stouts to help him become a little more independent. Vince
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Date: 3/6/2011 11:05:00 AM
Let him live forever in happiness...just he, and his toothless Mither, "Too-ra-loo-ra-loo-ral, Too-ra-loo-ra-li, Too-ra-loo-ra-loo-ral, hush now, don't you cry! Too-ra-loo-ra-loo-ral, Too-ra-loo-ra-li, Too-ra-loo-ra-loo-ral, that's an Irish lullaby." - No doubt she holds him tight at night, and sings to him just right! LOL ~JS Lambert
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Date: 3/5/2011 12:18:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem. My favorite line is "even the devil could take tips from your mischievous heart." Very clever. The last lines also gave me a chuckle. Nice.
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:20:00 AM
LOST.. soup mail....luv..
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Date: 3/4/2011 11:52:00 PM
St Patrick's day soon, is this for a contest, it's a wonderful poem Debbie, so creative. Harry
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Date: 3/4/2011 8:26:00 PM
COOL!VERY EXPRESSIVE.....GOOD JOB GIRL.
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:24:00 PM
Soup Mail in a few...
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Date: 3/4/2011 2:01:00 PM
Sure and this Black Jack must be the ultimate of all men. Love, daver
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:28:00 PM
Yup I tried extraction but the banshee won grrrrrrrr.
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:24:00 PM
ahh this has the sting of a strong Lassie's sharp tongue!! a bit of a bite she takes from the lagger's pride! oh...and i must thank this Lassie who writes... for my recent placement in your fine "mythology contest Thanks very kindly!! I am very pleased and appreciative!! :)
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:48:00 AM
i lovve the edgy, gritty feel of this piece..." toothless woman with the viper bite", etc.. what a study in contrast! you make me go whoohoo, lights!! winning piece if for the cowboy drill.... soupy mail! :) huggs
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