Black Jack

The wearing of the green
damn, if it doesn’t remind me of you
of the swashbuckling laggard you were
and the ripple of muscle across your broad back
the salt and pepper curls on your chest
and whiskers tickling my ear.

Ireland’s proud son bereft on the shores of
New England, sullen as only the Irish can be.
Black hearted when you wanted to be too.
Ah, but I saw the pot of gold
The twinkle in your eye, the swagger of
your copper tone hips, your tree trunk thighs
and the strength in your smiths hands.
Always a good ride you were.
Sure’n  even the devil could takes tips from
your mischievous heart.

Yet, you were Mommy’s boy, only one woman
good enough for you and none you’d let near
enough to her throat to cut the cord.
A right fine banshee of a woman, a toothless woman
with a vipers bite. And she’ll keep her bonnie boy
lashed to her until the day she dies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 7:27 PM
Poor lad. Needs a couple of Guinness Stouts to help him become a little more independent. Vince
Mister Roboto Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 11:05 AM
Let him live forever in happiness...just he, and his toothless Mither, "Too-ra-loo-ra-loo-ral, Too-ra-loo-ra-li, Too-ra-loo-ra-loo-ral, hush now, don't you cry! Too-ra-loo-ra-loo-ral, Too-ra-loo-ra-li, Too-ra-loo-ra-loo-ral, that's an Irish lullaby." - No doubt she holds him tight at night, and sings to him just right! LOL ~JS Lambert
Mister Roboto Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 12:18 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem. My favorite line is "even the devil could take tips from your mischievous heart." Very clever. The last lines also gave me a chuckle. Nice.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 5:20 AM
LOST.. soup mail....luv..
Horsman Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 11:52 PM
St Patrick's day soon, is this for a contest, it's a wonderful poem Debbie, so creative. Harry
Greenlee Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 8:26 PM
COOL!VERY EXPRESSIVE.....GOOD JOB GIRL.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 5:24 PM
Soup Mail in a few...
Austin Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Sure and this Black Jack must be the ultimate of all men. Love, daver
Guzzi Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Yup I tried extraction but the banshee won grrrrrrrr.
Richards Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 12:24 PM
ahh this has the sting of a strong Lassie's sharp tongue!! a bit of a bite she takes from the lagger's pride! oh...and i must thank this Lassie who writes... for my recent placement in your fine "mythology contest Thanks very kindly!! I am very pleased and appreciative!! :)
Onclaud Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 10:48 AM
i lovve the edgy, gritty feel of this piece..." toothless woman with the viper bite", etc.. what a study in contrast! you make me go whoohoo, lights!! winning piece if for the cowboy drill.... soupy mail! :) huggs
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