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Black Is the Night

Black is the night, still darker the waters; Repeatedly diving in search of his daughters. Last seen, sweet splashing, mere feet from the shore. Frantic, blind searches, then back to the surface. Crying to God - to what end, to what purpose? Hoping 'gainst hope he might hear them once more. ————— Honorable Mention for the Bite Size Poem No.40 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier written on 03/16/2022

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Date: 11/10/2022 9:09:00 PM
Dark, well done ~
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Date: 3/26/2022 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. He does hear. Have a blessed day/weekend.........
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/26/2022 8:50:00 AM
Thanks, Paula, the stuff of nightmares…

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