Black Hole Love - I'm Calling All-in

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black hole love [ hear the heavy metal song ]

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I stoked the fire, you drank the flame. I poured out my soul, you ditched the game. I'm gutted, bone dry, howling in pain - You reeled me in, gave nothing back again. Black hole love — you ripped me apart. I'm holding the line, playing my part. I gave and gave, you drained and drained. How did our love become so unchained? Oh Black Hole Love, I Give, You Suck, Getting nothing back, in return. I'm calling All-in! Black Hole Love, Black Hole Love. You twist my pleas - I'm on my knees. Let's play it straight, oh, baby please! All I want is some fire back from you. Not choking smoke on black strap blue. I won't break for you, anymore. I'm standing, knocking on your door. I want to love you more and more. You're the only one that I adore. Oh Black Hole Love. I Give, You Suck, Getting nothing back, in return. I'm calling All-in! I won't break for you! No more, No more! Black Hole Love ... Black Hole Love!

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Terry Flood

Date: 7/26/2025 12:05:00 PM

A head banging belter of a song, if ever there was one. Great lyrics and the song style entirely apt. Terry

John Anderson
Date: 7/26/2025 12:08:00 PM

Thanks a lot => Cheers and Best Wishes!

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/17/2025 10:40:00 AM

Ummm...wow!! I'm in awe of this coolness! This worked so well as lyrics! Congratulations on your placement John! Amazing! Xo

John Anderson
Date: 7/17/2025 4:52:00 PM

Thanks very much. Cheers and Best Wishes to you. Have fun !

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 7/16/2025 10:03:00 PM

I loved this !, John. A lucid straight forward interpretation of Love stroked with narcissism. Giving & Taking in unequal dependency is important lesson in Love. Heavy metal was a perfect choice for poem. This is one area to be explored where NI & AI can work together & make creative production less costly. I support your initiative in this area. x.

John Anderson
Date: 7/16/2025 10:57:00 PM

Yeah, thanks very much. Glad you like the initiative. Poems are meant to be heard and music is a wonderful background for them. It's fun writing lyrics and have them sung. You can even, draft the songs and rewrite the lyrics so they work in the song when played. Cheers and Best Wishes

Tom Woody

Date: 7/16/2025 5:51:00 PM

This was you? This was perfect for the theme John. The poetry was a little weak but the message as it relates to the theme and that hard rock AI song was totally cool. Congrats

Tom Woody
Date: 7/17/2025 2:40:00 PM

Btw, the photo also rocks!

Tom Woody
Date: 7/17/2025 4:47:00 AM

The chorus was especially catchy

John Anderson
Date: 7/16/2025 5:57:00 PM

Ok cheers. It was always a song!