Black Friday

black Friday
so long have detested you
traffic and shoppers
fighting over a cheap purse. . .
lost car in the parking lot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Oh..Black Friday, yes I know, people rush to the shopping mall. I have noticed that many people do not remember where they put their cars. So they search until the car is found.There is always a battle for the parking space. Have aq nice day my friend.
Promise Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 8:18 PM
Went browsing around during the day. Saw a store where everything was $20.00! Got a $100.00 plus coat for that $20.00 bargain. A great buy off line!
Murray Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 5:19 AM
I enjoy black Friday from the comfort of home. I buy online, from China.
Spagnola Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 9:16 PM
true that Thomas, I have never partaken ..your piece, caused a lil anxiety! jk..lovin the Tanka...:), jill
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 3:56 PM
yep, that is it exactly!!! I can relate!!
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