Black Friday

Their time together was heated
As she suspected he cheated
The lad did not know
No rain, no rain beau
So the cycle was repeated
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Canerdy Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 7:43 PM
Very clever, Rico! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Very good and like Valsa said!
Laurie Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 8:09 PM
Hello Rico ... it appears there are more than one Black Friday Rico - Lindsay
George Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 7:32 PM
Liked the alteration from rainbow to rain beau !
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