Black Friday

I won’t shop Black Friday
because I’m not ready
to fend for my life
in a scene rough and heady.

So call me a coward!
You won’t see me fight ‘em,
and risk getting maimed
for a much-desired item.



Date: November 28, 2019
Contest Title: McWhirtle Me
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Messina Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 12:22 PM
Love this, Janice. I once fought that crowd.. never again. Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays to you and your family. Hugs Charlie
Somadas Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 10:40 PM
Yes.. I too don't want to fight for the item I desired.. Nice one..
Canerdy Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 10:57 PM
Thanks so much, Jenish. Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 9:02 AM
I too will stay away.
Canerdy Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Wise, Richard. Janice
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 8:11 PM
Love how you put himor into yours. GOOD job.
Canerdy Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 10:24 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Bialczak Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 7:08 PM
Haha, my sentiments exactly!
Canerdy Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 7:16 PM
Thanks so much, Christine. Janice
Na Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Hi Janice well done and I agree I do my shopping from the computer on line. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck in the contest. Happy Thanksgiving
Canerdy Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 7:16 PM
Thanks so much, Gregory. Janice
Theraven Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Janice, I like the tone of this seasonal Friday poem. I'll go for you and pick up some cozy Ugg slippers. Happy Thanksgiving. -Richard
Canerdy Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 4:12 PM
Thank you so much, Richard. Sounds like a plan. LOL! Janice
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 11:48 AM
Lol! This is so good! My best to you in the contest :) xomo!
Canerdy Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 4:14 PM
Thanks so much, Mo. Janice
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