Black Eyes

Bemusing beauty of black eyes
As they stare into the silent soul
No need for needless words
As lusty love lovingly makes
Honest hearts hopelessly happy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Congratulations on your amazing win in Adeleke's Contest, Tahera. Beautiful "alliteration. Always, Annalise
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's contest Tahera. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Hey Tahera, good to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored fifth place win. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:49 PM
I am so happy this made the top ten. It was a well deserved win! congratulations, tahera.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:43 AM
Way to go Tahera my friend and congrats on another wonderful win in the Unspeakable Love contest... again so happy to be sharing the winners list with a great friend and talent luv..
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 10:53 AM
Congrats Tahera on your big win with this wonderful Alliteration---kashinath
Mehta Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Adeleke, Tahera
Adeite Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 9:19 AM
Wow Tahera ! This is an awesome poem & a wonderful entry, congrats on your placement in 'Unspeakable love' contest & thanks for your love & support! Keep writing. Love,always. Adeleke!
Poet Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Very good example of Alliteration Tahera,----enjoyed.--kashinath
Austin Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Eyes - gateway to the soul. something like that. Enjoyed. Love, daver
La France Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 8:39 PM
Your poem is lovely and the words chosen terrific, best of luck in the contest~~
Locksley Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Terrific use of alliteration Tahera. I can feel the passion. Good luck in the contest with this great poem. Best to you, Diane
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 7:27 AM
I really like your alliterative style coupled with the meaning behind this cute little poem, Tahera. I hope this one does really well in the contest!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 7:21 AM
Super spectacular sophisticated song in poetic portion Tahera... good luck in Adeleke's contest my friend.. a rare beauty ..luv..
B Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 1:54 AM
well written... loved the word play
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