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Black Eyes

Bemusing beauty of black eyes As they stare into the silent soul No need for needless words As lusty love lovingly makes Honest hearts hopelessly happy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/3/2011 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your amazing win in Adeleke's Contest, Tahera. Beautiful "alliteration. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/28/2011 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:49:00 PM
Hey Tahera, good to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored fifth place win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:49:00 PM
I am so happy this made the top ten. It was a well deserved win! congratulations, tahera.
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:43:00 AM
Way to go Tahera my friend and congrats on another wonderful win in the Unspeakable Love contest... again so happy to be sharing the winners list with a great friend and talent luv..
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:53:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your big win with this wonderful Alliteration---kashinath
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Adeleke, Tahera
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:19:00 AM
Wow Tahera ! This is an awesome poem & a wonderful entry, congrats on your placement in 'Unspeakable love' contest & thanks for your love & support! Keep writing. Love,always. Adeleke!
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Date: 2/21/2011 6:39:00 PM
Very good example of Alliteration Tahera,----enjoyed.--kashinath
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Date: 2/21/2011 10:08:00 AM
Eyes - gateway to the soul. something like that. Enjoyed. Love, daver
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:39:00 PM
Your poem is lovely and the words chosen terrific, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 2/17/2011 3:37:00 PM
Terrific use of alliteration Tahera. I can feel the passion. Good luck in the contest with this great poem. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:27:00 AM
I really like your alliterative style coupled with the meaning behind this cute little poem, Tahera. I hope this one does really well in the contest!
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:21:00 AM
Super spectacular sophisticated song in poetic portion Tahera... good luck in Adeleke's contest my friend.. a rare beauty ..luv..
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:54:00 AM
well written... loved the word play
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