Black Diamonds

The fell beast crouches where the light’s gone dim
An empty pedestal without its prize
to display.  One could mark the path so grim;
to study how the white glow fades and dies

Protectors could not help you hold the flame
to multitudes of darkness that conspired.
Extinguished by the poisoned rain of shame
that swallowed every trace of your lost fire.

Deep vacant stare that highlights your skull’s grin
Your empty room the light of dawn does mock
Yet does it smolder, hidden depths within?
Or gone like frightened mice before the hawk

Yet something snarls atop your earthly throne
Black diamonds gleam where your soul once shone

8/9/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rycroft Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Congrats well done great poem xxx
Quigley Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Thanks, Wendy!
Kimathi Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 6:51 AM
An eerie and captivating piece!! Congrats Tom, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Quigley Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy!
Onclaud Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 11:34 AM
terrific, tom.. my warm congrats!..huggs
Quigley Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Thanks, Nette!
Grahamburglar Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 6:17 PM
This is great! I tend to enjoy the darker tinted writes, and this one was right up my alley. Beautiful phrasing and vivid imagery. Very well done, sir. -G
Quigley Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 11:42 AM
Thank you, Mr. Burglar!
Warrior Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Superb!...congrats!!! on win Tom...god bless...^WW^
Quigley Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Thanks WW!
Rycroft Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Congrats on your placement xxx
Quigley Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Thanks Wendy!
Scars Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 3:26 AM
Tom, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
Quigley Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Thanks Laura!
Negron Flores Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Congratulations Tom on the placement of the contest
Quigley Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Thank you, Nayda! Fun contest!
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Dropping back with congrats Tom - that pic really spooks me !!:-) hugs Jan xx
Quigley Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Whoops comment jumped--thanks, Jan!
Quigley Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 3:40 AM
Spooky pic and such dark imagery - unique take on the black diamonds theme good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Quigley Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Thanks, Jan!
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