Black Diamond Child

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Black Diamond Child Black diamond child with hopeless eyes In your frightful future your talent lies No worth is greater than watching you grow To a world whose wealth you may not know The street schools you in the ways of hate And the price of your life’s at dime store rate Black diamond child with searching eyes In the rough you sparkle in disguise Young boy, young girl, you're the toughest stones Regardless of your precarious homes Your genes are heirs to our African past Through you, millennials, our race will last Grab hold to a dream and pray it comes true That the doors of this country will open to you Black diamond child with joyless eyes Like an ebony phoenix may you rise! 8/2/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/27/2020 1:25:00 PM
Such an awesome lyric with incredible imagery set up in interesting couplets. I loved the poem. I love the black diamond child!!!!
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Date: 10/16/2020 10:41:00 AM
Wow! Janis, you brought tears to my eyes with this beautiful poem. A prayer for all that are discriminated. A fav. Congratulations on your win love your imagery in your poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/16/2020 10:33:00 AM
Marvelous uplifting words to those with 'hopeless eyes, schooled in the ways of hate.' Your ending couplet is especially powerful. Beautifully penned, my friend, congrats in your podium win ~ John
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Date: 10/16/2020 8:20:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem, congratulations on your placement. :-)
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Date: 5/8/2019 8:23:00 AM
A profound pen. A powerful message that is as relevant today as when written. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe (aka mlowe5: Poetry Vibe. Com)
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Date: 12/24/2016 5:58:00 AM
JT, Truly an incredible poem with such a great message. Obviously, you have heard of Ebony Magazine. JT
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Date: 10/27/2020 1:27:00 PM
Make them send you a big fat check first! This poem shouldn't go cheap!!!!!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 12/24/2016 2:29:00 PM
Ebony is a dark timber from a tropical tree. Maybe the magazine will publish me, lol.
Date: 8/16/2016 8:13:00 AM
Congrats well done x
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/16/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thanks, Wendy. Glad to see knew PS friends. Welcome.
Date: 8/16/2016 6:45:00 AM
Deep, vivid and powerful!! Congrats Janis, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/16/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, Teddy.
Date: 8/13/2016 7:02:00 AM
So powerful and well penned...Congrats on your win
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/13/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph...I appreciate your stopping by.
Date: 8/13/2016 3:26:00 AM
Janis, this is just beautiful lady...congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/13/2016 12:14:00 PM
Thanks, luloo.
Date: 8/13/2016 1:29:00 AM
Easy to see why this one is a winner. Unique entry as well. Congratulations.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/13/2016 12:16:00 PM
Thanks....You have been a source of encouragement, Andrea. Because of some of your comments, I have not been afraid to cross the norm.
Date: 8/12/2016 6:46:00 PM
Congratulations Janis on the placement of the contest
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/12/2016 8:56:00 PM
Thanks, Nayda. It was a great idea for a contest. Very motivating. Thanks for being multi-dimensional in your judgement.
Date: 8/12/2016 4:15:00 PM
what a unique take on the theme Janis - the final couplet is a joy to read:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/12/2016 8:58:00 PM
Thanks....since I've never seen a black diamond, I didn't think about jewelry.
Date: 8/6/2016 3:09:00 AM
Such a beautiful harmony to this seamless couplet...these wise words are so needed for our youth today...Powerfully written!!!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/6/2016 10:12:00 AM
Thank you very much.....
Date: 8/3/2016 8:29:00 PM
This is so powerful and deep but also so sad, Janis. It gave me goosebumps. "Like an ebony phoenix may you rise!"...wonderful words of wisdom and love. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/3/2016 11:26:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra hugubac....
Date: 8/3/2016 6:08:00 PM
wonderful message, awesome write...David.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/3/2016 11:27:00 PM
Thanks, David.
Date: 8/3/2016 2:37:00 AM
Well done! I think I just read the winning poem which is a jewel, Janis - lovely and moving ... CayCay
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/3/2016 12:38:00 PM
My fingers are tightly crossed Caycay but either way I am thankful for the motivational prompt for the poem.
Date: 8/2/2016 9:13:00 PM
Wonderful Janis. Just beautiful. Reads like a winner in my book.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/3/2016 12:40:00 PM
You never know. Thanks for your encouragement.
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