Black Diamond

An elegant black movement A sparkle from within Embroidery of golden light Knitting magic on the skin Raising the gleaming axe Aiming at the dry branch The black diamond in pursuit Of her daily livelihood Many a male tourist in the hills Seeks to have the sparkling diamond Like a necklace in their body Whisperings from the black melody At any such amorous approach Her hands would put up the glittering axe Twinkled the lovely cloud-white teeth Laughter around the hillocks beneath Two hillocks of beauty and grandeur Two peaks in blue ecstasy Two radiant black diamonds Two windswept trees of almonds Returning home the black beauty Sits under the black berry tree Holds the flute of his companion While playing it they ride a stallion Stallions and mountains all around Some people with orange passion Love to stay in sunny pursuit Of the chiseled black diamond ____________________________________ August 6, 2016
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Nusker Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 7:28 AM
Quite an enigma. Full of beautiful descriptions. Congrats on your win with this awesome poem, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 12:22 AM
Thank you ...
Murray Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Sensual. Is Black Diamond a man, a woman or a stallion?
Gupta Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 12:17 PM
That is an enigma ...
Rycroft Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Congrats 1st well done and great poem x
Gupta Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Thank you ...
Kimathi Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Congrats Probir, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Gupta Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 6:38 AM
Thank you ...
Warrior Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 1:30 PM
Congrats!!! Probir...great verse my friend...god bless...^WW^
Gupta Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Thank you ...
James Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Great win , well done
Gupta Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Thank you ...
Rycroft Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Congrats well done on your win great poem x
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Thank you ... Congrats on your placement too for your 'Diamond' ...
Daniel Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your top spot with this wonderful write, Probir:)
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Thank you ...
Scars Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 3:24 AM
Probir, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:49 AM
Thank you ... Congrats on your placement too ... Yours I read with great pleasure ...
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Congratulations, Probir......
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Thank you so much ... the flower is lovely ...
Negron Flores Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations Probir on the placement of the contest
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 12:17 AM
Thank you so much Nayda ...
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Your words flow so beautifully Probir congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 12:17 AM
Thank you Jan ...
Y. Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 12:19 AM
Thank you Alexis ...
Mcconnell Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 8:17 AM
nice one Probir, really love your flow and rhyme, well done again, have great day, Gordon
Gupta Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Thank you very much ...
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 2:59 AM
Great flow with wonderful imagery Probir. I really enjoyed reading this tonight. Blessings Carl
Gupta Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Thank you ...
Wigley Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:31 AM
This is great, Probir, flows beautifully, and a slightly sinister edge to it. Well penned. Even with a keyboard. Regards, Viv
Gupta Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Viv.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:05 AM
Awesome from beginning to end Probir. Your pen is golden! 7 ; )
Gupta Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:28 AM
Thank you ... Ah, I would love to have a pen ... but days have changed to our disappointment or joy I don't know ... we are dependent on keyboarding ...
Trifiatis Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 1:48 AM
Happiness could be found anywhere if one knows what and how to look for. A very captivating writing dar, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 4:51 AM
Thank you ...
Onclaud Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 6:15 PM
black is beautiful, probir... splendid read!..huggs
Gupta Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 5:02 AM
Thank you ...
Rycroft Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Good poem Gupta well written x
Gupta Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 5:03 AM
Thank you ...
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