Black Diamond

An elegant black movement A sparkle from within Embroidery of golden light Knitting magic on the skin Raising the gleaming axe Aiming at the dry branch The black diamond in pursuit Of her daily livelihood Many a male tourist in the hills Seeks to have the sparkling diamond Like a necklace in their body Whisperings from the black melody At any such amorous approach Her hands would put up the glittering axe Twinkled the lovely cloud-white teeth Laughter around the hillocks beneath Two hillocks of beauty and grandeur Two peaks in blue ecstasy Two radiant black diamonds Two windswept trees of almonds Returning home the black beauty Sits under the black berry tree Holds the flute of his companion While playing it they ride a stallion Stallions and mountains all around Some people with orange passion Love to stay in sunny pursuit Of the chiseled black diamond ____________________________________ August 6, 2016

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Date: 10/12/2016 7:28:00 AM
Quite an enigma. Full of beautiful descriptions. Congrats on your win with this awesome poem, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/13/2016 12:22:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/22/2016 9:37:00 AM
Sensual. Is Black Diamond a man, a woman or a stallion?
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/22/2016 12:17:00 PM
That is an enigma ...
Date: 8/16/2016 8:07:00 AM
Congrats 1st well done and great poem x
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/16/2016 12:16:00 PM
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Date: 8/16/2016 6:35:00 AM
Congrats Probir, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/16/2016 6:38:00 AM
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Date: 8/13/2016 1:30:00 PM
Congrats!!! Probir...great verse my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 2:15:00 AM
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:58:00 AM
Great win , well done
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Date: 8/14/2016 2:15:00 AM
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Date: 8/13/2016 9:22:00 AM
Congrats well done on your win great poem x
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:05:00 AM
Thank you ... Congrats on your placement too for your 'Diamond' ...
Date: 8/13/2016 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot with this wonderful write, Probir:)
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:06:00 AM
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Date: 8/13/2016 3:24:00 AM
Probir, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/13/2016 5:49:00 AM
Thank you ... Congrats on your placement too ... Yours I read with great pleasure ...
Date: 8/12/2016 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Probir......
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/13/2016 12:16:00 AM
Thank you so much ... the flower is lovely ...
Date: 8/12/2016 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations Probir on the placement of the contest
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/13/2016 12:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Nayda ...
Date: 8/12/2016 3:59:00 PM
Your words flow so beautifully Probir congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/13/2016 12:17:00 AM
Thank you Jan ...
Date: 8/12/2016 3:36:00 PM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/13/2016 12:19:00 AM
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:17:00 AM
nice one Probir, really love your flow and rhyme, well done again, have great day, Gordon
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Date: 8/8/2016 10:13:00 AM
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Date: 8/8/2016 2:59:00 AM
Great flow with wonderful imagery Probir. I really enjoyed reading this tonight. Blessings Carl
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/8/2016 10:14:00 AM
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Date: 8/7/2016 9:31:00 AM
This is great, Probir, flows beautifully, and a slightly sinister edge to it. Well penned. Even with a keyboard. Regards, Viv
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Date: 8/7/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Viv.
Date: 8/7/2016 6:05:00 AM
Awesome from beginning to end Probir. Your pen is golden! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/7/2016 6:28:00 AM
Thank you ... Ah, I would love to have a pen ... but days have changed to our disappointment or joy I don't know ... we are dependent on keyboarding ...
Date: 8/7/2016 1:48:00 AM
Happiness could be found anywhere if one knows what and how to look for. A very captivating writing dar, Probir.
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Date: 8/7/2016 4:51:00 AM
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Date: 8/6/2016 6:15:00 PM
black is beautiful, probir... splendid read!..huggs
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Date: 8/7/2016 5:02:00 AM
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Date: 8/6/2016 10:55:00 AM
Good poem Gupta well written x
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Date: 8/7/2016 5:03:00 AM
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