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Black Crows

Hear those two black crows? They kept me awake last night And when I did sleep Situations were a fright I wonder? Is there a law?...............................................

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Date: 7/23/2011 8:26:00 PM
daver, congrats on your poem being featured this week,have yourself a wonderful weekend,..p.d.
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Date: 7/17/2011 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Daver. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 2:27:00 PM
super congrats Daver on your featured poem this week on PS my friend.. great one to share luv..
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Date: 5/26/2010 2:55:00 PM
hahaha, Go SHOOT them NOW!!!
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Date: 7/26/2009 7:34:00 AM
Kool write Daver>>James
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Date: 8/27/2008 6:07:00 PM
Okay, this made me laugh out loud....I wonder? Is there a law?........love it!!
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Date: 8/26/2008 1:54:00 PM
Thanks for allowing me to chuckle with this one. Cute poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/16/2008 2:40:00 PM
there should be a law, this was a very funny and cute poem, enjoyed it. thank you for reading my Yesterday's Sorrow and for you comment. sorry it took so long to get back with you on that one. I wasn't get emails when someon commented on my poems, and since i was off the soup for awhile I didn't know about it until yesterday but it's fixed now.
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Date: 8/16/2008 1:32:00 PM
Crows are very intellegent birds, they will run (fly) circles around the cops, lol. Good one. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/15/2008 12:21:00 PM
I reckon that depends on if your City or Country folk - great poem about a very aggravating bird - God bless Daver
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Date: 8/15/2008 8:02:00 AM
I hate crows. Forgive me but I do. Must be all those Stephen King books I've read. Hope they've gone away, for good, the natural way. : ) Love, Shar
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Date: 8/15/2008 6:56:00 AM
Um, gee...I wonder too. lol I bet nobody would be the wiser, that's for sure, and you'd have a lot happier neighbors! lol thanks for the giggle, love Kristin
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