Black Crows

Hear those two black crows?
They kept me awake last night
And when I did sleep
Situations were a fright
I wonder?        Is there a law?...............................................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 23, 2011 at 8:26 PM
daver, congrats on your poem being featured this week,have yourself a wonderful weekend,..p.d.
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July 17, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Daver. Love, Carol
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July 17, 2011 at 2:27 PM
super congrats Daver on your featured poem this week on PS my friend.. great one to share luv..
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 2:55 PM
hahaha, Go SHOOT them NOW!!!
Fraser Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 7:34 AM
Kool write Daver>>James
Farley Avatar
August 27, 2008 at 6:07 PM
Okay, this made me laugh out loud....I wonder? Is there a law?........love it!!
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August 26, 2008 at 1:54 PM
Thanks for allowing me to chuckle with this one. Cute poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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August 16, 2008 at 2:40 PM
there should be a law, this was a very funny and cute poem, enjoyed it. thank you for reading my Yesterday's Sorrow and for you comment. sorry it took so long to get back with you on that one. I wasn't get emails when someon commented on my poems, and since i was off the soup for awhile I didn't know about it until yesterday but it's fixed now.
Buys Avatar
August 16, 2008 at 1:32 PM
Crows are very intellegent birds, they will run (fly) circles around the cops, lol. Good one. Regards Heidie
Jordan Avatar
August 15, 2008 at 12:21 PM
I reckon that depends on if your City or Country folk - great poem about a very aggravating bird - God bless Daver
Winter Avatar
August 15, 2008 at 8:02 AM
I hate crows. Forgive me but I do. Must be all those Stephen King books I've read. Hope they've gone away, for good, the natural way. : ) Love, Shar
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August 15, 2008 at 6:56 AM
Um, gee...I wonder too. lol I bet nobody would be the wiser, that's for sure, and you'd have a lot happier neighbors! lol thanks for the giggle, love Kristin
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