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Black Crows

Hear those two black crows?
They kept me awake last night
And when I did sleep
Situations were a fright
I wonder?        Is there a law?...............................................

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/23/2011 8:26:00 PM daver, congrats on your poem being featured this week,have yourself a wonderful weekend,..p.d. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/17/2011 3:08:00 PM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Daver. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/17/2011 2:27:00 PM super congrats Daver on your featured poem this week on PS my friend.. great one to share luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/26/2010 2:55:00 PM hahaha, Go SHOOT them NOW!!! Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/26/2009 7:34:00 AM Kool write Daver>>James Login to Reply

Barb Farley Date: 8/27/2008 6:07:00 PM Okay, this made me laugh out loud....I wonder? Is there a law?........love it!! Login to Reply

Date: 8/26/2008 1:54:00 PM Thanks for allowing me to chuckle with this one. Cute poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 8/16/2008 2:40:00 PM there should be a law, this was a very funny and cute poem, enjoyed it. thank you for reading my Yesterday's Sorrow and for you comment. sorry it took so long to get back with you on that one. I wasn't get emails when someon commented on my poems, and since i was off the soup for awhile I didn't know about it until yesterday but it's fixed now. Login to Reply

Heidie Buys Date: 8/16/2008 1:32:00 PM Crows are very intellegent birds, they will run (fly) circles around the cops, lol. Good one. Regards Heidie Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 8/15/2008 12:21:00 PM I reckon that depends on if your City or Country folk - great poem about a very aggravating bird - God bless Daver Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 8/15/2008 8:02:00 AM I hate crows. Forgive me but I do. Must be all those Stephen King books I've read. Hope they've gone away, for good, the natural way. : ) Love, Shar Login to Reply

Kristin Reynolds Date: 8/15/2008 6:56:00 AM Um, gee...I wonder too. lol I bet nobody would be the wiser, that's for sure, and you'd have a lot happier neighbors! lol thanks for the giggle, love Kristin Login to Reply