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Black Cloaked Man

In one ghost whisper of a town, the mourning sunset had bloodshot eyes A tombstone place that was long shadow past it’s boomtown prime Withering eureka hope fills the short cups of the abandoned mine folk Whiskey tears takes a canary desperado gulp Purgatory waiting ~ Gut rot has all the suicidal time in the world to stomach more wasted dreams On this dying twilight night, a bad moon is darkly rising ... as the half-empty saloon doors swing During visitation of a short desert weep, a 6-foot four twin emerald glow mysteriously steps out of the downpour A black-cloaked man, with twelve lead fingernails, was tapping a cold metal dirge melody as he walked in Taking up space for two, the raven-haired man said to no one in particular, Death was his sidearm friend After ordering the strongest bottle from a shakily, weak-handed bartend ... the tall, dark-clothed man saw gambling courage slowly returning in the pale faces of the paying patrons Green hue greed shone in the mirror reflection — his baleful, beryl stare saw that avarice look before Plenty of bottom card dealt undertaker action was coming ... coffin photos taken of a bloody floor Midnight was always the best time for quick draw ire killings When drunken surfeit hearts had a belly full of wanton violence feelings Losing was the spark that lit the firewater spillings Scarlet darkness overshadowed the cemetery sob kneelings Cloaked in the mantle of a soul reaper, the blackness of a red bullet hole was a grim reminder to those witnessing the terrifying departure of slow hand ... cheating, widow purse keepers — That a dozen toasts for the living always were closing-of-the-eye cheaper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/9/2019 5:34:00 PM
Hello Freddie, I lke the story in a poetry form. Have a nice evening my friend. Peace, love, joy. Darlene
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Date: 12/13/2018 7:53:00 AM
beautiful write...uncanny...sounds like the reaper man from hell lol
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Date: 12/12/2018 10:25:00 AM
You, dear Freddie, are always bountiful with imagery. Love this Old Western style scene in all its sad grimness. I joined the Cowboy Art Museum for one year and it has drawn me to the Old West so especially love the read. A fave. Keep the ink wet and be blessed always. <3 Kim
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Date: 12/12/2018 9:19:00 AM
Excellent, Freddie!! You took me along with you, as I saw it all evolve from the security of a shadowy corner, not daring to breathe or even whisper, afraid of breaking the spell. Such poetic narrative is hard to emulate, believe me! ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 12/11/2018 6:35:00 PM
Masterfully penned epic... a riveting tale to the end! You filled this with excellent detail, and I love so many of the phrases you used- like "Withering hope fills the short cups" and "When drunken surfeit hearts had a belly full"... very aptly described. Well done!! ;)
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Date: 12/11/2018 6:20:00 PM
An Amazing epic, Freddie.. Exciting and interesting.. Really stirred my curiosity.. Bravo!! Blessings to you..
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