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Black Capped Chickadees

Black Capped Chickadees
      hop from branch to branch, then swoop
                     dipping in the air
              Birds having fun in the trees
           chirping, singing, as they please


Heidi Sands

9/12/20

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Judy Ball Date: 9/14/2020 5:50:00 AM Love this. I love those little birds. So merry and fun to watch. I feed them through the winter. Great description here. I could see them in my mind's eye hopping from snow capped branch to branch. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/14/2020 1:37:00 PM I am happy you love this one Judy. They are cute little birds. Yes, they come in winter too. For now they were hopping around summer's branches- soon to be fall. Thank you. God Bless :)

Rico Leffanta Date: 9/13/2020 12:04:00 PM In Hawai'i, we have beautiful Fairy Terns, soaring playfully around clear blue skies and through vibrant rainbows for everyone to see - if they look up! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/13/2020 12:07:00 PM Oh that sounds so nice Rico! I visited Hawaii once and loved it there, but it was a long time ago. Enjoy those beautiful sights! Thank you :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/12/2020 10:30:00 PM your lines have a fanciful feel to them heidi... this awesome...huggs Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/13/2020 7:31:00 AM Thank you very much Nette! Hugs :)

Sam Kauffman Date: 9/12/2020 9:05:00 PM Hopping, swooping, dipping, chirping - sounds like a fun party! Such a lovely refreshing write. So glad I found this tonight. It lifted my spirits! All the best. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/13/2020 7:31:00 AM I am so happy this lifted your spirits Sam. These birds certainly lifted mine yesterday watching them. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a nice day :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/12/2020 6:52:00 PM Nice image and great lilt and flow to this adorable tanka, Heidi. Really nice! ~ Watch the birdies, Gershon Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/13/2020 7:30:00 AM Thank you Gershon. They were flying all about yesterday, just this way! I appreciate your comment. Have a nice day! :)

Bob Ewing Date: 9/12/2020 1:47:00 PM I have a tatto of a balck capped chickadee on my right arm. they are amazing. Your poem brings them to live. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/12/2020 1:48:00 PM Wow, I can see you like them too. Thank you very much Bob :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/12/2020 1:31:00 PM I see them having fun--images of chickadees flash in front of me as I read your poem. You captured the sights and sounds beautifully, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/12/2020 1:45:00 PM Glad to hear that you can see it. They were surely having fun. Thank you Vijay :)